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get help! Need critques?
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:48 pm    Post subject: get help! Need critques? Reply with quote
Ok this is a post your needing to critques or your wanting a good story offer.

Ether say what's a good story and post a link or post a link and say you want critques.

I my self have had my fair share of hard times so...ya.

There you go.

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R.ed R.iding H.ood: wolfish boy needs more reviews! Oh and I got a contest too.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
*moved to Will Review for Food*


You may also consider using proper grammar and spelling in your post. If you're offering to critique, it's probably best to look like you know how to write.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 12:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I have a poem thats need more reviewing: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29375.html

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 12:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks Suzzan I finally founded in thanks to you.

I reveiwed it. Verylong but great job.

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PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 9:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'm soo hungry! Feed me!

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PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 9:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I wouldn't mind another review on Sirens' Symphony seen as you appear to be so desperate Wink

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