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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:26 pm    Post subject: I'm here to Help Reply with quote

I would like to help people with their peices. I'm not so much for grammar. I critque more for content. I not one for sci-fi. I specialize in Romantic Fiction, Ohter Fiction, and poerty. I can deal with questionable content, but I can't do anything X- rated. Hope I help.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[url]http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29151.html]RUNAWAY: Chapter One[/url]

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 3:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

My first coustomer!!! I reviewed you story and it was great Very Happy ! Please come again!!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have a short story called How You Break My Heart (I've posted the last bit now). Do you think you could take a look at that?

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

There are three parts, and it's due soon. Could you check it over really quickly?

Thanks so much!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chocololic and JFW1415 your stories are reviewed.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi there!


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Please and Thank You!

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Overeasy. Your review is posted Smile.

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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey there! Can I have a review for "The Shiner"? Thanks if you do!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29511.html

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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 7:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I reviwed it. I'm sorry that I wasn't so prompt. Sad

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PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2008 8:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Anyone interested? I really want to help.

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PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2008 10:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have three poems I'd like reviewed. I know you can't do three of them, but just choose one and do that, and I'll be forever thankful.

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PostPosted: Fri May 23, 2008 10:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It would help alot of I knew which poems they were. What are the names?

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PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2008 5:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Things Seen In Cab-Ride #276
Just Like Bobby Zimmerman's Blues
Don't Act All Hurt/Don't Be Silly

Sorry about that. Thanks!

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 6:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Done Icarrus. Smile

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