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aestar101
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:26 pm Post subject: I'm here to Help |
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I would like to help people with their peices. I'm not so much for grammar. I critque more for content. I not one for sci-fi. I specialize in Romantic Fiction, Ohter Fiction, and poerty. I can deal with questionable content, but I can't do anything X- rated. Hope I help.
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:02 am Post subject: |
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[url]http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29151.html]RUNAWAY: Chapter One[/url]
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aestar101
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 3:58 pm Post subject: |
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My first coustomer!!! I reviewed you story and it was great ! Please come again!!!!  |
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chocoholic
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JFW1415
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:21 am Post subject: |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html
There are three parts, and it's due soon. Could you check it over really quickly?
Thanks so much!
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aestar101
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:39 pm Post subject: |
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| Chocololic and JFW1415 your stories are reviewed. |
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OverEasy
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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:44 am Post subject: |
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Hi there!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29341.html
Please and Thank You! |
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aestar101
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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:59 pm Post subject: |
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Overeasy. Your review is posted . |
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Periwinkle
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Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 11:39 pm Post subject: |
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Hey there! Can I have a review for "The Shiner"? Thanks if you do!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29511.html |
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aestar101
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 7:28 pm Post subject: |
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I reviwed it. I'm sorry that I wasn't so prompt.  |
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aestar101
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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| Anyone interested? I really want to help. |
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Icaruss
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 10:23 pm Post subject: |
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| I have three poems I'd like reviewed. I know you can't do three of them, but just choose one and do that, and I'll be forever thankful. |
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aestar101
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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 10:45 pm Post subject: |
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| It would help alot of I knew which poems they were. What are the names? |
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Icaruss
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aestar101
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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Done Icarrus.  |
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