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Heart of a Leopard, Chapter 1, part 1
Heart of a Leopard, Chapter 1, part 1
by Rosey Unicorn in Fantasy Fiction
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PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2008 12:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Put it in chapters and I willingly will. Oh and it's not Christmas :p.

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PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2008 12:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
According to the Crazy Frog it is.

Scavenger. It's just the one chapter, so no mess for you. ^_^ Scroll down until you get to the part called Drych-ddelwedd. Please?

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Fine, and I'll willingly do the other if posted in chapters Smile. Just hard to keep track of not getting anything when reviewing. If that made sense, please post in chapters.

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PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2008 12:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I hate posting in chapters. So there. Wink

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Oh well ya loss, because it detracts, posting in chapters, lets people go in review one chapter and wait for next one or go looking for next one if they like it.

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If there're that interested, they should go look in the thread when it shows an update. Or ask to be informed.

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PostPosted: Sun May 18, 2008 10:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hola Vernon.


I wasn't sure if it was really romanti-cal, so I put it in the "other fiction" section. It's raw and not the greatest (and in first person, which is a writing style I can get dangerously comfortable with), so thanks a bunch!

Called: You're on in Five, and its the first part out of hopefully others.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post369895.html#369895

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