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Mortality
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 Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 4:57 pm Post subject: New Victoria Pictures |
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Hey new pics.
She wanted to be the 5th beetle as a girl 
So i gladly took the pictures for her!
Once again she wanted to take a picture of herself?!
She is a weirdo, lol, she likes to take at least one of herself.
No comments on this one lol
It's cool
Here is the last one.
Also in case someone ask i use this website to edit my pictures
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| Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 5:15 pm Post subject: |
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Hello!
Picture #1>> Very cool! I like the "oh, really?" type of expression.
Picture #2>> I like the contrast of the orange-ish background and her green eyes. but I would like to see more of her forehead and less of her neck and chest. Also, the lower right corner is a bit too bright, methinks.
Picture #3>> Haha, again, I love the expression! And the colors are very nice, as well.
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| Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 5:26 pm Post subject: |
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I prefer the first two photos to the last one. I like the colours of the second one a lot - it also has a beautiful shot of the background.
Her pose in the last one is a bit odd. Her head is bent too far down and she looks a bit awkward. Apart from that, they are all lovely photos.
Nice job,
Alainna
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