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Your Lips On Mine
Your Lips On Mine

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 1:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Bella (of course)

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Race: Vampire/Fairie

Weapon(s): Double Kantanas and a whole bunch of daggers (has sheaths on her ankles, thighs, hips, and arms, along with an extra dagger down her shirt Wink)

Can use magic?: Yes, to some extent. Has natural enhancements in speed and strength and such, because of her vampiric side. And then she has some faery magic, of course.

Appearance: http://images.quizilla.com/E/EC/ECH/echo999/1132966603_evilanime1.jpg << makes her look quite young
http://www.foroswebgratis.com/imagenes_foros/4/2/0/4/1/399625anime-fairy-sketch_op_648x800.jpg << this one looks more teenager-ish

She doesn't really have a tail, and her hair is more...mauve, for lack of a better description. And her wings are bigger.

Personality: Bella is stubborn, and prefers to be a leader. The rest will be learned as the storybook goes on.

History: Was born a faery, and glamoured to look human. She lived among humans, and fell in love with a scottish-accented vampire. The vampire, thinking he would be with her forever, bit her to change her. Once she realized that he was a vampire, she realized she didn't truly love him because she was too terrified of him to truly love him for who he was. Also, she was then changed into a vampire, which sent her into a deep pit of hatred for herself.

**Hope this is okay**

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 3:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

***ok this is really turning into a good story*i hope all of you have as much fun as i am***

selena~


i sat staring at the fire. i knew that sooner or later i would have to get up and start walking. i missed my mother but i knew she was in safe hands with lady quinn looking after her. i only hope they're safe somewhere far away from Celixon.i also hoped that shiro and sara were ok as well. i had grown up with them and i just want them to be safe.
i got up and put out the fire. it was night so i changed into my dragon form and flew across the trees hoping, that by weeks end i'd be at the mountains of dawning and, at the rebels camp.
what i knew about the rebels was scarce. i knew that anyone opposed to Celixon was welcome there. i hoped that the knights of my family were travelling that way so that i would know for myself that they were well.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

**Can someone brnig me in? I don't really know what to do...**

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

***Um...let me see what I can do. Selena wanted me to find her character, anyway, so I'll find yours in the process!**

Arias

There was a girl walking in front of me. Half fairie, and half...something else, something dark. Probably a variation of elf, as silent as she was.

I crept ever closer, using my long legs and soft feet to get right behind her in two strides.

"Hello, there," I spoke, making her jump.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Quinn))

Quinn emerged from the baths, cleaned and in a dark blue velvet shirt and tanned breeches. She quickly trotted across the camp to her cabin. She pulled her long pink hair back with a leather band with her left hand and opened the door with her right. Inside the main room stood Leon, a pan at hand which held their cooking dinner. Her looked up at her and smiled as he tossed the food into the air, catching it in the pan.

"Welcome back, dear dove. How was the trip? Grimy I would suppose."

Quinn sighed an plopped herself into a chair, letting her legs stretch out across the floor, "I told you to stop calling me those silly names. Those are for little ladies who love to dance and party." she responded with a scowl.

She dropped her head on her hand and rested on the table. She looked over her old friend. His usual mane of red hair grew much lighter, orange with occasional streaks of white. His tall and lanky body donned similar clothing to herself, only he was dressing in orange silk. He turned with two plates filled with food. Leon set one down before Quinn and took his own seat, promptly scarfing his food into his mouth. Quinn sighed and started eating.

Leon finished a bite, "Well, you are a beautiful dove and you should be reminded of more often. I mean, I don't how your survived on those cold and achy roads; without my constant compliments I'm surprised you didn't just up and die out there."

Quinn rolled her eyes at the werewolf as he downed more food, "You look different." she said, changing the subject.

He glanced up, his eyes bright against his tanned skin, he grunted and finished his food. "I was with a clan of the desert, the Didongo. As you can plainly see, my skin is now a miserable shade of tan and my hair is ruined!" he finished with a note of horror in his voice. This drew a chuckle out of Quinn.

"Your hair is lovely and your skin matches it perfectly."

Leon leaned back, "How will I ever live?!" he demanded, "All I had left was my dashing looks!"

Quinn grinned, "You haven't changed a bit, my whiny friend."

Leon shot her a sloppy grin, "Of course I haven't, dear dove. I'm Leon of Silver Hill! I never change!" his eyes grew serious as he leaned down, "Are you going to eat that?" he inquired, gesturing at her half empty plate. Quinn sighed and shook her head. Leon quickly took the plate and began devouring it.

"I see the Black Hole hasn't closed itself up yet."

Leon smiled down briefly at his stomach, "No. No it hasn't, thank gods. Oh!" he called out, remembering something, "Mistress..."

Pounding erupted from the door, almost sending Quinn onto the floor. Before she could bark an order the door flew open. A tall, burly man entered with a smaller woman behind him. The mans flat nose and dark brown skin sparked a memory in Quinn's mind.

"Ayro!"

Ayro grinned, "Welcome back, Lady Quinn."

Quinn got up out of her chair only to be swept up into a monstrous hug. The man swung the surprised lady around and she her down, only to hold her at arms length. Ayro's squinty brown eyes looked her over, "My, my! Our little dove has grown into a raptor! Who knew that could happen?"

Quinn laughed, "Now, I just told this to Leon, stop calling me dove."

Ayro took his eyes off of Quinn to look at Leon, "She's actually still a dove, just a ferocious, man-eating dove." drawled Leon.

Ayro released Quinn, "Any food for us?"

Quinn caught the us and remembered the other visitor. She looked over the woman who came in, silver eyes and black hair. The Fairy Queen.

Quinn smiled, "Good evening, Queen Melody."

The queen smiled, "Hello, Quinn. How are you?"

Quinn smiled and offered a seat. The queen took it while Ayro plopped into the seat between the queen and Quinn. Quinn sat down again, "I'm well. I just returned from a trip to the capitol."

The queen's face was grave, remembering her ruined home. Leon saved everyone from the silence with three more plates of food, one for Queen Melody, one for Ayro, and one more for himself.

"Gods, Leon. Two plates I could understand, but three?"

Leon once again grinned at Quinn, "This is light, dove." and returned to his food.

Quinn suddenly remembered why everyone called her dove. It was so natural to be called that that she forgot her family emblem, a pink dove flying over a field of black. She smiled, the memory and old friends made her one happy knight.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shiro-

He removed his hand from the sword. "I am sorry, but in this day and age you can't blame me for being careful."

Sam stared at him." I suppose, but you should still ask questions first then act."

Shiro nodded, and bowed. "I Shiro am very sorry for this disrespect."

Sam smiled.

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Sam~

Sam smiled, swished her tail back and forth and pricking her ears at the wind change. "A storms approaching, so it seems," she said, tilting her head to the sky. "I'm Samantha Jukirio," she told...Shiro. "Shiro, correct?" The human nodded. "You best be getting to the next town...the storm seems like a large one," she smiled and him and pivoted on her heel, beginning to walk back into the forest.

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Shiro-

He increased his speed to the next town- Sendai. A small town mostly of black smiths and farmers. Sam had rushed towards the nearest woods. Shiro smiled.

"Interesting."

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Sam~

Sam transformed back into a wolf and quickened her pace. "Why are you going so fast?" Tsune growled, trying to keep up with her.

"Hungry," she replied. Tsune nodded and stopped. "I'll meet you on the other side of the town. I'll probably bring you a sheep or two back." Tsune howled in agreement as she went out of sight.

The last thing she heard was a farmer scream for help as she carried two sheep away from his flock. She finished off one and transformed back into her human self, the taste of blood still of her tongue. She spat and ran to the other side of town, where Tsune waited. She tossed him the sheep, which he ate in one gulp.

"Shrink," she growled. Tsune became the size of an apple and jumped on her shoulder. She smiled and pulled her tail under her cloak, and a hood over her head. "We'll wait in the nearest inn and we'll leave tomorrow at daybreak. Tsune barked in agreement as they walked through the town.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 2:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shiro--

hE got a room in an inn at Sendai.

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Name: Mage Icelus

Age: 157

Gender: Male

Ancestry: Mother-human Father-mix-Grandfather-dragon Grandmother-half vampire, half werewolf

Weapon: Oaken stave

Magic: Shapeshifting, dominion over animals, persuasive to intelligent creatures (Playable races) Pure elves and fairies are immune, more elven/fairy blood, the weaker the influence Persuasion due mainly to bloodlines . also potion brewing

Appearance/garments: Traditional style blood-red cloak and hat, long, dark gray hair and beard, one golden eye, one blood-red eye. Features are sharper than normal.

Personality: Cares for little but knowledge, power, and influence. Collects many different things. Does care for animals.

History: Has always had most of his powers.Was once the adviser and councilor to the human king, but left at his death.Some say he killed the king.Has gained knowledge of plants and herbs over the years. The grandson of the king he knew now rules. He disappeared altogether shortly after the death, and has remained hidden until very recently.He is now seeking power among the shambles that the death of the true Dragon King and the disappearance of the crown brought

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bella wrote:
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What you do is you write what your character does. You can't contradict what has already bean said. You cant kill other peoples characters either. Other than that, you have free reign.

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Sam~

Sam yawned as she walked into the inn. She stopped dead in her tracks when she saw the human from earlier. She hissed through her teeth and walked up to her room.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 12:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

selena~


i woke up as dawn approached.i had flown for about two hours the night before and was exhausted. i knew a town was nearby i would stop for food before continuing on my way. the towns name was Sendai if i remembered correctly. i could find lodging for the night i was sure. i started walking hoping that senpai at least had no kings spies waiting in the wings.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: Just wanted to say, Pundit, I know what to do in the means of a storybook, I just didn't know how to get my character in there.

Bella

"Hello," I said, turning around calmly. "Can I help you?"

>.< sorry it's so short...i'm low on time tonight.

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