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PostPosted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 2:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Would you, please? =D

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Done, darlings.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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If youre not too flooded, please? Very Happy

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Chapter 2, thank you!

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 1:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How about it? Lol, hope you don't mind critiquing this for me!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37545.html

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, Penguin! I only have one critique on this, and I really need help with it.

5 stories for Cal's Contest

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Could you rip this apart please?

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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If you have time, please? Smile

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 9:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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I shalt ask thee these questions three: Can thou review this piece, please. Can thou help me to make this piece better. And can thou review the other capters ??? Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Next Scavenger, please? Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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If you've got the time, I'd like it if you'd look at this. It's a longer story, to be split into parts for the viewing ease of everyone. If you don't want to review each and every part of it, I understand.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 7:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

prologue and chapter 1 need reviews ^_^


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35779.html - prologue

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35820.html -chapter 1

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 5:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pengu my darling!

How I miss your reviews.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38895.html

Pretty please?

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 10:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Hi Pengu! If you would rip this to pieces I would appreciate you.

I know I asked you to review a work called The Masquerade. Disregard that. I'm not going to work with that anymore.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 02, 2008 11:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I know you have many critiques to do but if you don't mind doing reviewing mine, that would be awesome!!

It's a short story.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38876.html

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