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Lil_Pau
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 Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 10:00 am Post subject: If I Were The Fairest |
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If I Were The Fairest
(Chosen sin: Envy)
I dress on the endless chains of roses,
dragged out from Hades's deepest chasm.
I will trample your dreams of Paradise,
to reach the place where you are.
The fruit which I sink my angry fangs into
reflects the happy smile on your face.
Is it a way to soak my heart
In the juice of shamefulness?
If I were the Fairest,
I would reply your proud smile.
I'd love to see the shocked expression -
Crumpling your face -
And tearing yourself away.
If I were the Fairest,
I would crush your heart into a million pieces.
I'd love to see your eyes widen in disbelief,
And fade away in front of me,
With your once-beautiful, butterfly-like wings
crumbling into dust.
And yes, my dear, there is no escape from me now -
Because another will surely die tonight. |
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blacktiger3915
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Country: Atlanta,GA USA
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I really liked this poem. I thought it was written quite nicely. You have talent in writing poetry. I will love to read more of your work. Best Wishes!!!  |
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