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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 4:27 pm    Post subject: Critiques! Reply with quote
Hello, all!

If you want a crit, tell me so here! Just make sure to post the link, so I can find it.

Some things about my reviews:
1. I like to review Other Fiction, Fantasy Fiction (<--most of the time) Historical Fiction and Non-fiction.
2. I can be made to critique poetry (if you give me cookies) but I don't know how helpful the review would be because I don't really know much about poetry.
3. I'm only 13--please don't give me anything rated R.
4. I don't want to critique "chapter 47, part 2 out of 7." Wink
5. Here are a few examples of my critiques: Crocodile Teeth, The Deadlne.

Thanks!
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 11:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
heya I'd appreciate a critique of this =] :

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post327399.html#327399

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 11:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
This is rated PG-13.

It's an series of stories, but they stand apart alone mainly, so you don't need to read the others to understand what is going on. It is also in 'Fantasy Fiction'

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27666.html

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I only need less than twenty more crits in order to get another star!

...so, who wants a review? They're free.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'd love one on my new story! It's three parts, and here are the two I have up:

Part One: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

Part Two: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28953.html

Do whatever you can! Thanks a million! (And let me know if you want one in my 'want a critique?' thread! I need another star, too.)

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Will you critique what I have of The Gate of Glendon, my new novel? The prologue and first four chapters and sitting in my portfolio, just wishing they could be ripped to pieces by critiquers.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
So sorry, but I've gotten to the point where I depend upon you for reviews! DX! So here's chapter one of "Yarn". You so graciously reviewed the prologue, and it'd help a ton for a review on this one! Please? THANKYOU!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28937.html

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey, I'd appreciate a critique of my story:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28798.html

Could you also tell a couple of other people about it maybe? I haven't gotten any critiques yet! Thanks!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

There are three parts, and it's due soon. Can you look at them quickly/relook at them? (I can't remember if you read it before I edited...)

Thanks!

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