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 Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:55 pm Post subject: Pep For Poets |
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Get your poetry critiques here! The next couple of weeks are a great time to ask because I'm off uni for easter. But of course, after that I will certainly still make time to answer every request I receive. So post your poetry links here and I'll give you my finest crits. 
I also offer spelling and grammar checks for all works, so if spelling or sentence structure is your weakness, PM me your word document and I'll edit it and get it back to you ASAP.
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| Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 9:05 pm Post subject: |
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Hiya, Matt!
Could you take a look at this for me?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28349.html
I can raid your portfolio in return if you want.
Thanks!
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| Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:59 am Post subject: |
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Does poetry also mean lyrics? I'm looking for some critiques on a song I wrote. If you can't do lyrics, that's fine, but I'd really like it if you could take a look.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28448.html
Thanks heaps. |
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| Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:24 pm Post subject: |
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Hey there, Matt
I'm participating in the NaPoWriMo and I was wondering if you could take a look at my NaPo thread (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28173.html). You don't have to give very in depth or specific critques, but a few broad general impressions for improvement would be greatly appreciated.
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| Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 10:54 pm Post subject: |
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Hello! Back with another
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28892.html
Please and Thank you!
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 4:19 am Post subject: |
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Oh! Me! Me! Let's see if I can get the link-thingie right...
I Am Legend
**OH YEAH!!! POWER TO ME!!!!**
Note: this has absolutely nothing to do with the movie.
Crit appreciated! Anything I put up on here generally gets ignored, so... |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:31 pm Post subject: |
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I'd love one on this if you get a chance;
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic23799.html
If you don't, don't worry. I'm happy to critique poetry in return so feel free to pm me or post in my thread here. |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:51 pm Post subject: |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33351.html
everyone seems to be avoiding it, so If you want you can look at it! Thanks. |
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| Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 5:13 am Post subject: |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post398973.html#398973
Just posted this. I'm not that great at poetry and need all the help I can get. XD
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Hello 
If you please
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33396.html
Thanks!
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