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 Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 7:53 pm Post subject: Maximum Ride: The New Breed DT |
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Okay, i know its a little strange for me to create this and not bigbad but we need one, badly. Where is the story going? I think we need to create some sort of plot here. Any suggestions?
Okay, here's a list of characters because those always help.
BigBadBear- Nate, 15, male, leader, escaped, can sense the near future
cat4prowl- Blade, 15, female, escaped, had a power but i dropped it
piepiemann22- Sam, 17, male, stayed, excells in combat and tracking
Layleun- Mayze, 14, female, escaped, sees wind currents and can tell people's emotions that way, an innate ability with medicine and herbs, in a relationship with ZT
Black Cat Sachiko- Lyssa, 15, female, escaped?, can communicate with birds
SishBee- Arro, 16, female, stayed, chameleon powers
TNCowgirl- Colt, 17, male, escaped, quick reflexes
Aedomir- Michael, 14, male, escaped?, can change shape into objects
Blue Fairy- Rose, 14, female, escaped, can influence people's emotions
Teh Wozzinator- ZT, 13, male, escaped, improved senses, in a relationship with Mayze
October Girl- Lexy, 14, female, escaped, hacking, being under water and running for long periods of time
sylverdawn- Kei, 16, female, escaped, generates/manipulates energy
Firestar- Reed, 15, male, can convert sun's energy into his own
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I think that's it? Not everyone is active, some may have dropped out, tell me if anything needs to be modified.
Okay, I've noticed we're at a lull in the story at this time. Any suggestions for a plot please share. I think building up relationships right now might be good, friends and romance or whatever. Let me know what you guys think! |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 11:04 pm Post subject: |
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I thought I'd help out a bit so I furthered the listing down to the people who are active.
Blade
Mayze
Colt
Rose
ZT
Lexy
Reed
I think that should be our final flock because some people haven't even posted once. As for the story, perhaps we could find Max and the gang? |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:16 am Post subject: |
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| and Stella, don't forget Stella 'k? I think that's it.... IDK good work Cat4 |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:22 am Post subject: |
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okay say we were to find Max and everyone, why? because we want to help them? and how would we be able to find them? reply to fang's blog?
im just throwing out questions and ideas, i dont want this one to die. |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:29 am Post subject: |
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| I don't think we should find Max and the gang (wow this feels weird saying my own name) |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:34 am Post subject: |
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| cuz then what? Pat them and send them on their way? What fun would that be? |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:47 am Post subject: |
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| good point, anyone have any other plot/conflict suggestions? |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 1:03 am Post subject: |
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| How about the Whitecoats are trying to stop us from getting to The Flock. |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 1:16 am Post subject: |
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| yeah that makes sense, they would probably be worried about that kind of thing. the only thing is, that means more battles. the drama is getting a little old, you know its like oh we're safe! just kidding we're under attack! run! fight! safe! injuries! run! fight... |
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| Oh lord. More injuries XD That means more plant research. Fun fun fun! |
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| ^.^ It's actually fun being able to learn more about the plants I love so much *hugs medicinal plants books* |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 8:32 pm Post subject: |
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Lupe: Lol!
I agree that there's too much "fight, run, pause, fight, run pause..." I don't think we should find the Flock, because we're kind of our own group right now, and besides a few posts on them we're pretty much new... besides the Whitecoats and Erasers. I'm not sure what to do... but we need a change, and I think one that doesn't involve Max and the others. (Besides you, OctoberGirl/Max  ) |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 8:43 pm Post subject: |
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I agree, I'm tired of fight run pause. How about we break it up by making them go to school, or meet new people in some sort of public place, or throw in some romance, or have them find out about something they want to know or need to find or someone they have to be wary about?
^ wow i think i just spilled my brains all over the page... |
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