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I haven't written fluff in ages, but if you'd look at this one for me, I'd be ever-so-grateful. 
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| Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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Oh! Oh! Me! Me! I've got a three part story, is that OK?
Tangled Up In Blue.
EDIT: I just noticed you reviewed my überlong story in the Advanced Critiques section. Thanks a lot! |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 8:29 am Post subject: |
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Well seeing as you all but pleaded....
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31140.html |
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| Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:52 pm Post subject: |
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Darling! *huggles* Well, you're just about the coolest person on site now, arent' you?  As such, I was wondering if you'd be so good as to take a look at the prologue and first chapter of Gypsie Eyes: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31678.html.
I've locked that big, humongous thread that everything was on before, and am now posting the chapters seperately. I'd really appreciate it if you could help me out, especially as I hope to get this one published. Is there anything I can critique for your in return? |
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:47 pm Post subject: |
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Hey, J, guess who's back? I know, you're simply aghast at my return.  Anyway, I have a little story that I'd like you to review. As always, I'll be more than happy to review something of yours in return. Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33082.html. Thanks. |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 4:49 am Post subject: |
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I am finally caught up.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 6:01 am Post subject: |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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| Hey, J, guess who's back? I know, you're saying, "I just reviewed some of his crap, how can he have more?" But I do. This story is in the same universe as a previous story, "And All This But Mere Perceptions." It looks at some of the things I used in that story, but I don't really know if it answers any questions about them. As always, I will review something of yours in return. Here's the story: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33308.html. Thanks a bunch |
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| Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 1:12 am Post subject: |
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Okay, I just posted this and I need reviews. It's the first chapter of a supernatural horror. Sorry, it's kind of long.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33373.html
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Keeping Time
It's short, less than 1,000 words. I'd love general help. You know, the overall stuff. Does it work? Is it realistic? How are my details? I'm not particularly fond of the title, so help in that area would be awesome! |
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:12 am Post subject: |
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Possibly? ^_^
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33479.html |
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| Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:16 am Post subject: |
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All caught up except for doing more of Gypsie Eyes for gryf and a 55 page story for niccy_v that I'm doing a little at a time. Any others?
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In response to hearing my new story idea: "Aunt April": Oookaaay. You are one sick little puppy aren't you? |
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Conrad Rice
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| Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:28 am Post subject: |
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How about this? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33638.html
Here's a shocker: This story happens without any paranormal or science fiction parts to it. I know, what happened to me, right? |
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Stella Thomas
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| Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:45 pm Post subject: |
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Jen, could you please review my piece "Faerie Wings"? It's very short, but I'd like you to tear it to shreds for me.
Thanks!
-Stella x |
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