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Maki-Chan
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 Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 10:12 pm Post subject: The Ripple Effect |
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Now everyone, your character must be a citizen, or live in within the city limits!
Everyone's characters know each other or will. Your Character(s) are trying to find out what happened to the girl who committed suicide, which is affecting everyone in the city somehow. Now here is how the character log should look like. Also this is fantasy so your character can be an elf, alien and more!
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Species:
Personality:
Appearance:
How he or she is effect:
Background:
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1. No killing anyone's character without permission
2. no god modding
3.no sex stuff please
4. don't go too crazy with curse words
Here it is 
I listened; every sound became a heartbeat. That beats along side every living thing in ‘the city’, becoming one single sound- the pipes pounding harder and harder, just as my heart does. A sense of emptiness fell upon my shaking body. It’s not right, being like this. Being apart of another thing. The bright lights below me shined neon colors across my pale emotionless face. It seemed almost dream-like staring at the lively streets below me, all of the people continuing their lives unknowing to the horrific presence of ‘the city’. What ‘the city’ truly was and what it was doing to all of its citizens- a truth among many lies that the ones who serve ‘the city’ tell the naive people living within the walls bordering ‘the city’, keeping us all trapped.
I breathed in a large amount of the cold night air; I could taste a little bit of car smog in my mouth. I held it in, hoping for the cold feeling of the air to stay in my lungs. But after only a few seconds I released it, and I watched my visible breath drift away till it vanished into the freezing nighttime sky. I felt like crying, but I held it in. The only way to stay hidden was to feel nothing; no joy, sadness, not even fear- I had to hurry, dread was starting to erupt from my trembling body.
Taking a deep breath, I stepped forward and off the ledge; the destruction of ‘the city’ has begun.
Here is my character
Name: Crimson Lee
Gender: female
Species: oni(demon)
Age: 14
Personality: she is curious and likes to figure stuff out. She is a little strange.
Appearance: http://www.elfwood.com/art/l/i/linute/devil___skinny.jpg.html
How he or she is effect: Her mother is missing one day. After days of her mother hurting herself. She wants to find out the truth of what happened.
Background: She loves her mother very much. Her whole entire family disappeared one after another. Only her mother disappeared when Crimson was alive. |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 11:55 pm Post subject: |
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Name: Ian
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Species: Half Demon
Personality: Observer and thinker. He is always thinking of what could happen next. He's kind, but isn't concerned about having a social life. Even so, those he does befriend become his life, his family. He seems cold hearted in scary, but it's just his character.
Appearance: http://ninjatic.deviantart.com/art/OC-voodoo-ninja-78226917
How he or she is effected: He lost most of his memory. All he can remember his a man and his dead mother. he has learned of a lot of strange incidences and feels they,re all connected.
Background: Not much to say. He lives in the shadows of many around him. |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 1:29 am Post subject: |
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Name: Issau
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Species: snow lynx and human
Personality: she is lively and vivacious, always up for an interesting situation, and has a curiosity so strong that it may have provoked the saying "curiosity killed the cat"
Appearance: She is mainly human, although with a lithe grace rarely depicted by the species; her black hair is cut in a bob and reveals two white ears with black tips, she also has a tail and slit pupils set in brilliant amethyst eyes. She is also tall, about 5'9" and likes to taunt people, especially men by swishing her hair.
How he or she is effect: she can only go to places that have been visited by her companions. for someone to be her companion she must spend every minute of 6 days and nights with them (can one of you guys volunteer to be the companion?)
Background: she can remember nothing of her past life, but surmises that she must have, of course, been a rich warrior princess, given her subconscious knowledge of the workings of most modern weapons and a haughty attitude at times |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:46 am Post subject: |
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*i can be Issau's companion if its alright*
name- Ashe Sylver
gender- female
age- 17
species- storm elemental dragon (wind/water/lightning)
personality- stubborn, reckless and competitive. Extremely loyal to her friends. A short temper and slightly naive, sarcastic and a smartass. She is prideful and arrogant, but curious about anything to do with the Outside World, which thus makes her an outcast in the city. A cunning tactician, Ashe has her own, very strange honor code, and will follow it even when it clashes with the City's rules.
appearance- shoulder length silver hair, catlike green eyes shot through with silver, tanned skin, short about 5'3 in height. a birthmark shaped like a twelve pointed star in the bowl of a crescent moon on back of left hand. Vibrant green wings with silver undersides.
how he/she is effected- wants to leave the City and return to her Streak (dragon tribe).
background- Ashe is one of the few people in the city who was born in the outside world. Because he feared her abilities, she was left in the city by her Uncle shortly after her powers manifested, when she was 6. And was taken in as a Ward of the State. She longs to fly, but due to the City's laws she never has. This desire has driven her to find higher and higher places to stay in. |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 12:40 pm Post subject: |
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(Sorry Maki!! Never got a chance to post this till today  )
Name: Naomi Greane
Gender: Female
Species: Youkai (Demon)
Age: 14
Personality: Fun-Loving, Outgoing, Curious, Loyal, and stubburn
Appearance: http://osy057.deviantart.com/art/Girl-29138792 (Dark Violet Eyes & Black Hair)
How he or she is effect: Her 'little sister' went missing...?
Background: Eek! Um...she grew up by herself till age thirteen, then another demon, younger than her, appeared on her door step. Her sister is around six. |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 4:39 am Post subject: |
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So when exactly are we starting this? Just wondering..
Oh, and thanks sylverdawn, we should probably PM each other or something to get our 'relationship' thingie straight,etc.
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| Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:50 pm Post subject: ^_^ |
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* Tn your person is ok- just remember no god modding! ^_^*
Crimson-
It was too late. She had not ran fast enough to stop it. To stop her mother from dissappearing.
Crimson stood thier in the empty house. Traces of a fight in the house could easily be seen.
"To think, if I had not taken 1st street I would have made it in time." Crimson whispered.
Flash back-
"Crap..." Crimson moaned.
The little demon girl ran down the empty street towards her apartment. But for some strange reason she stopped. Crimson looked into the sky.
"What is that?" She wondered.
An object was falling from the sky. It almost looked like a bird. But it wasn't. It was a person who'd just jumped off a building. WHAM! A loud sound came from when she hit the ground. Crimson ran to see what it was.
"Oh my god..." She relized it was a person.
Covering her naked body was tatoos. The tatoos were words. Like 'it's all a lie', 'look beyond what you think to be true' and ' jaggernaut'.
Flash back end-
" This sucks..." Crimson cried.
Her crystal clear tears dropped from her eyes. The end had started. |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 9:12 pm Post subject: |
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***Trust me, I wont***
Ryder-
Ryder rubbed his eyes, images of Katie as she jumped filled his eyes. He couldnt' stop her. He had seen her, he was standing on another building, but he hadn't been able to get to her in time. All the things she had written on herself flashed through his mind. Why would she do this to herself? Why would she do it to him? He wanted to cry, she was the only friend he had had after being banished from heaven. He didn't even want to try going to hell and seeing if they would take him. Earth would have to do, even though he would be stuck there forever. He sighed, this wasn't fair. Why, why did they have to take Katie from him.
WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME!?!?!?!?! He screamed towards heaven and hell at the same time in his head. WHAT DID I DO TO YOU?!?!?! He slowly opened his eyes and the street came to view again. He was leaning against the wall standing in front of where Katie had landed. He was supposed to be emptying her apartment, but he would do that later. He couldn't go up there now. No way was he going to put himself through that hell. |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 11:17 pm Post subject: |
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Naomi~
Naomi searched the town furiously. Her sister had gone missing. But how? Why would she run away? I bet it was from the fight earlier! I'm such an idiot! She cursed herself as she searched through the town alleys.
"Jenna!" She called, beginning to freak, "Jenna! Where are you?!" Images of her and her sister's fight filled her head.
Flashback;
'No! I won't let you go alone!' Naomi shouted.
'Then get your lazy, teenage, butt off the computer and take me!' Jenna argued angrily.
'I'll take you tomorrow! I've got a paper to write!'
'It's always something isn't it!?' Jenna ran up stairs and locked her door. Naomi shook her head and stomped up the stairs, knocking on the door.
'Get your ass out here and finish your homework!'
'No!' Jenna opened her door and threw a math book at Naomi, who reached out and grabbed Jenna by the arm.
'Now!' She yelled in her sister's face. Jenna furrowed her brow and fumed as she walked down the stairs, Naomi squeezing her arm the entire way.
End.
"DAMMIT!" Naomi shouted as she ran further down the street. |
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Ashe-
The thin breeze blew across the city striking Ashe in the face. Her nose twitched the scent of blood drifted heavy on the breeze. Someone had died near here. Curiosity stirred, Ashe leaped from the building's rooftop, she fanned her wings out to slow her descent and landed lightly on the stained cement of the alley. She turned her head into the almost non existent wind and took off running down the street.
A small voice at the back of her head protested the reckless action. "This is stupid I should be meeting Issau at the cafe." Ashe pushed the thought aside and focused completely on tracking her eyes were a whirl of emerald and silver, pupils narrowed to tiny slits. The scent of blood had roused her nature, and the hunt had begun. |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:51 am Post subject: ^_^ |
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Crimson-
"Its not fair. Why would she do this?" Crimson yelled.
All because she had to see the body. All because she read what was written on it. The demon girl wiped her eyes. She couldn't stay here anymore. Crimson ran towards her backpack and filled it with clothing, money and more stuff like a brush. She headed out the door and out of the apartment.
" As long as I still breath I will save you. From whatever took you away....mom...." She whispered.
Uknowing to her a figure in the dark followed her. Ready to eat. |
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Ian watched from a top a building as people walked below him. he wished to know what was going on, and badly. It was eating at him. As he was thinking he got a bad sensation and turned, Bloodlust.
He ran a top the roof and jumped down a fire escape to see a girl running down the alley with, something behind her. He cursed under his breath and leaped ,"Watch out!"
The girl turned and the monster moved to strike. Ian got in the way just in time and pushed the creature away, but was cut down the left arm. He reached into a back pouch and pulled out some throwing knifes a slue the creature. he looked at it to see it was a demon, a lesser demon who's only purpose was to kill.
He turned to the girl, also a demon and asked, "Are you alright?" He clenched his arm on sank to one knee pulling out some badges to stop the bleeding. |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:17 am Post subject: |
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I'm not a fan of fantasy...but if Maki did it, why not?
Red Rover ( Yes, that's his name)
Age: 13
Species: Human ( then later a werewolf)
How he's affected: He watched it take place through his telescope 10 miles away.
Personality: He is often skeptical of the mystical. He live's within a gang building as a tenant and is treated well. He is kind to strangers and willing to help anybody...even the Devil. He goe's by the saying ' Anyone in need of help is willing to return the kindness' even though he never got one favor returned.
appearance: Black slicked back hair, Black and white jacket. |
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