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 Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:17 am Post subject: >_< |
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Crimson-
The horned demon girl stared at the other demon man who had saved her life. What little life she was left with. She nodded.
He sighed." I'm Ian."
She looked away." Since you did save me and was nice enough to tell me your name first. I'm Crimson Lee."
"Why are you out here all alone." Ian asked.
" I don't tell strangers my life story. Now if you exuse me I'm going to have dinner." Crimson rudley said to Ian. |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:18 am Post subject: |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:36 am Post subject: |
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Red Rover looked in the telescope and watch the woman fall off the edge.
" Oh my god..." Red gasped as he followed the woman down to the ground.
" Hey Red, you want a Snapple?" Fernland shouted to Red as he went up on the roof through a door on the stairway." It say's that 50 percent of suicide victims fall to their death."
Red was silent as a crowd began to form around the body.
" Red?" He gasped and looked at Fernland who was putting a comb through his black hair.
" I saw someone jump." Red said and then slumped to the roof floor.
Fernland looked in the telescope and smirked." Your becoming a man Red, You have to see blood to become a wolf gang member."
" Not if the person killed themself's!"
" It's all part of the routine..." Fernland patted Red's shoulder and carried him downstairs and headed for the first floor.
" Where you taking me?" Red Murmered and felt really weird.
" Oh, a little suprise never hurts." |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:49 am Post subject: |
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When they reached the first floor, it was all dark.
" What's going on here Fern?" Red said suspicusly.
Then suddenly a match was lit and 13 candles were lit.
" Happy birthday to you!"
It was the entire Wolf Gang!
" Oh you guys, this is really heartwarming!" Red said with a laugh and walked to the table holding the cake.
" Happy birthday to you...."
" Well," Fernland chuckled," You helped us a lot here and decided as soon as you blow out those candles, your one of us!"
" Happy birthday dear Red..."
" really?!?!" Red said, now these guy's are spoiling me!
" Happy birthday to you!" Everybody cheered.
It was too dark to see the gang but Red Nodded to all of them and closed his eyes.
" I wish that I could become the best wolf there is..." Red whispered and blew out the candles, the candles flickered more powerfully at the extra Oxegen and suddenly Red saw the wolf gang were all sitting on four legs, with hairy arms, legs, and...a face of a wolf.
It lasted two seconds, but seeing the Wolf gang lasted a minute to Red.
He then felt someone's hand on his shoulder.
" Happy birthday Red." Fernland smiled and revealed his large teeth...and bitted into Red's shoulder.
" AAAHHHHHH!" Red screamed as the blood iced the cake.
" AAAAAAAHHH!" He screamed a second time as his vison went blurry.
" AHHHHHHH!!" Red screamed a final time as he sat up in bed. |
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 4:29 am Post subject: |
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Issau--
She woke up, dazed. Shaking her head, she looked around.
Crumbling rubble, smouldering fires and twisted pieces of scrap metal surrounded her as far as the eye can see. Strangely, they seemed to radiate in a blast pattern centering around her spread-eagled semi-counscious body.
Slowly testing to make sure that nothing was broken, she sat up.
No memory of how she had gotten there came to mind, in fact, nothing came to mind. Her brain seemed to be as blank as a clean whiteboard. Beginning to hyperventilate,she slowed down her breath with a comanding and thought, Ok, if this is how it's going to be, let's try something... What. Is. My. Name?
The answer came slowly but surely, like a bubble rising through clear tar, she could sense its approach, but could do nothing to hurry it up,
Issau
She, Issau, looked into the distance and saw a figure coming her way through the wreckage.
"Oh thank god! It's you---" she thought hard, another bubble formed, and then a name"--Ashe!" She smiled triumphantly. |
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 5:27 am Post subject: |
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Ashe-
She was late, really late, Issau was probably going to chew her out. But when she caught up with the other girl and saw the wreckage around the first words out of her mouth were. "What happened hear?"
*all i got, i'm wiped out* |
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Red Gasped and looked around the room. It was almost dark.
" Jesus..." Red sighed and looked at the bandage on his shoulder.
" Oh man..." Red whimpered and remembered Fernland, who saved him from a life on the street, fed him, and treated him with respect...bite him in the neck.
He then heard step's.
He was in the Tenet in his room...he has to get out of here.
Red began to open the window and then it suddenly made a loud creaking noise.
The footsteps began to come closer.
Red Hopped out onto the fireescape and just about when he was about to close the window, the door to his room slammed open and fernland jumped to the window...only to get glass slammed on his face.
Fernland then began to calm down.
" Red, come back inside."
" NO!" Red yelled and began to kick the rusty ladder to get down.
" It's not safe, you do not know the full extent of your abilitys and come back inside like the boy I knew a few minutes ago."
" You bit me Fern!" Red then saw the ladder go down.
" Only to help you join the wolfs...Just accept it....You won't feel any diffrent then what you are right now...just...more powerful."
" No...Leave me alone!" Red shouted and then slid down the ladder. |
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 12:30 pm Post subject: |
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Naomi~
Naomi watched the little show of a boy sliding down a ladder and a were-wolf trying to stop him, as she checked the ally way.
Once the boy was all the way down she asked, "Have you seen a little girl that looks a lot like me but is alot younger?" Naomi noticed the bandage on the boys shoulder and waited for an answer. |
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" Kind of busy here!" Red said to the strange girl when he heard Growling behind him.
Red grabbed a pipe from the side of the alley and quickly turned around with the pipe trailing behind...it then hit Fernland in the face.
Fernland took a couple of steps back and looked at his blood. He chuckled.
" You should have not done that Red....It's not nice." Red then watched all the hair on Fernland's body grow...it grew until it looked like a wolf and his face began to mold into a wolfs as well. The only thing that remained of Fernland was a bit of clothes on the side of the alley.
" Just wait there Red, Ive known you for ten years....why are you running away?" Fernland then began to circle Red.
" Your not the kid I knew....Your not some....freak who goe's around biting people!"
Fernland growls in frustration." Do I have to spell it out for you? The wolf gang, wolf's, I'm a werewolf....your a wolf...so that means..."
Red quickly ran up to Fernland and he knocked the pipe on the side of Fernlands skull. Fernland roared and knocked Red down with one swipe of his paw and he quickly putted it on Reds chest.
" I Think you need a little more nibbling..." Fernland licked his teeth and then quickly bit into Red's arm.
" GOD!" Red cried out in pain as Fernland ripped into Red's arm. Red closed his eyes...it would be all over soon.
" What are you doing?" Fernland gulped and then suddenly there was whimpering and a whipping noise. Red was too afraid to open his eyes.
The weight on his chest was free and red looked up to see Fernland run away in terror and up the firecape.
Red looked behind him to see the girl who was asking that question.
" No...I never did see someone younger then you."
The girl sighed." Sorry for troubling you." She walked out of the alley and down the street.
Red frowned." Sorry for the trouble? I should be saying 'thanks for saving my hide'!" Red then heard a howl and knew it was trouble. He then began to run. |
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 3:58 pm Post subject: ^_^ |
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Crimson-
THe little demon girl walked away from Ian. He just stood there. Crimson started to run as soon as she went around the corner. She had heard the sounds of the wolf gang near by. The did not like demons too well.
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 4:46 pm Post subject: ^_^ |
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*I'll bring you in TN*
Crimson-
As she ran around another corner- WHACK! Crimson ran right into another person. She fell to the ground." Owww." She moaned rubbing her head.
SHe looked up. The man she ran into was tall, tanned and had short black hair. THere was one other thing he had wings. Yet he was still a demon, cause his eyes radiated a demonic ora. Crimson couldn't help but stare. An oniTenshi( Angel demon) were rare, even for this city which had more than most other places.
He bent down to face her." Are you ok?"
Crimson blushed. He was very handsome. |
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Naomi~
Might as well give up for now...she'll come back when she's ready. Naomi reassured herself and began following the boy who was being chased by were wolves. Help? Don't Help? Naomi decided on helping as she jumped down from her hiding place, grabbed the boy's jacket sleeve, and pulled him through different ally ways, trying to confuse the scent-crazed wolf men.
Once they were far enough from the were-wolves, Naomi stopped running and took a deep breath. "Sorry about that," she laughed. |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 12:54 am Post subject: ^_^ |
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*Ok Tn, ignore the part about your wings then  )
Crimson-
"Yah, I'm ok." She answered.
Something about this man made Crimson relxed. The man helped her up.
*all i got* |
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