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Aedomir
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*yay someone revived it! thank you!*
~Aedomir~
The road to Helm's Deep was slow, even under the pressure to move out. Aedomir bore his armour gracefully, and was forced to leave Coraline within the crowds.
Soon after, someone screeched and ran up to him.
"Warg riders are coming!"
Aedomir gasped, and took the reins his horse. They road up towards the front of the vanguard, where the rides gathered. An elf stood at the mountain top, letting rip clsuters of arrows in rapid succession.
"Charge!" called the King.
Aedomir rode like the wind through the plains into the Gap of Rohan. |
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RoryLegend
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Coraline-
She held tight to Aedomir as they rode on, loving the way it felt to hold him. She was very strong and wise. She trusted him with her life at this point, not exactly sure why.
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Isinaar
I kicked my horse forward, pulling my sword out and testing its weight in my hand for a second, before focusing on one of the warg riders. I pushed my horse harder, charging at him even as he turned to charge me.
A moment later we were almost level. I drew my arm back to stab him, but the warg gathered itself and leapt at me, jaws bared. I jammed my sword down its throat, even as its momentum carried me off my horse.
I rolled away from it as I hit the ground and jumped back to my feet, running back to it and pulling my sword from it, then stabbing the orc even as he managed to free himself from his steed's corpse. |
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