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Bella:
I grinned. "Knives. They are much more fun. Moving targets? ANd, I'm sure I can still beat you!" I teased. Was I flirting? I cursed myself in my head. Stop that! "ANyways, this time you go first."
He threw his knives, and made the target.
It was mine turn. I tossed it expertly, but this time it was my knife that got caught in the wind. I cursed. I hated losing. I sighed.
"Well, it looks like you won THIS time. What is it you shall have as your prize?" I asked. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:30 pm Post subject: |
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Caedwyn smiled to himself. "I'm afraid that as a solitary ranger, possesions have little meaning to me. Your friendship, Bella, would be enough for me."
Turning, he said to Brian, "And I would enjoy yours as well, although we were in no contest."
Suddenly, he saw a solitary horse in the distance, with what looked like two small riders on it. As he watched, one of the riders fell, and he knew the signs of exaustion.
"Bella, Brian, we have to help them!" he cried, sheathing his knives and leaping on Amenorin.
(This is during Theoden's son's burial. You know, the two kids who Eowen saw?) |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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>yeah, she was singing at the funeral<
~Aedomir~
He walked quietly to his small, shabby house near the edge of the hill, Coraline at his side. He risked a glance at her, but shot them away before they locked. She was beautiful. He had never seen such a lost angel, and yet, something was amiss with her. Perhaps she would explain everything back at the house. Prostitute? No. Maybe she is was a refugee from the westfold. Where is Eomer? he thought.
At length, thay reached his home. He felt ashamed to possess it, but that's what you get for serving the bloody military for five years. Still, he was proud to ride with them.
They walked in, and Aedomir gestured for her to sit down. She did at a nearby stool, and Aedomir quickly took his seat on a straw bed. "Right, tell me everything," he said. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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We all three rushed to the two children.
Bella:
"Poor things! Are you alright?!"
Neither one answered. I grabbed the one that had fallen and bent down on one knee. "Where did you come from?" the child just looked at me.
"Brian! Grab that food I packed and toss it this way."
He did as I said. I fed the two children.
"One of you can ride with me, the other with my brother. We have to get back to the city. Soon!"
We rushed back.
"Gandolf!" I yelled as we entered. He turned, astonished. "Sorry to interupt, but I think you might want to talk to these children." I pushed. |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 5:18 pm Post subject: |
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| >It's Gandalf! lol< |
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Caedwyn stood quietly off to the side, watching Gandalf bring the two children into the Hall. A woman ran up, and started speaking to them as Gandalf took a seat by Theoden. He noticed an elf standing beside a rugged man, and in a flash his attention was focused on him. Was that an elvish Evenstar around his neck? If it was, then that would have to be Aragorn, the Dunedain ranger. Caedwyn felt his breathing quicken slightly, and he worked to control it, looking instead at the elf. That would have to be Legolas, the famed woodland archer. There was a dwarf not so subtly eating at the table, with a large red beard and hair down his back. The woman stood, and spoke to the king. Caedwyn stiffened as he heard about the orc attack on the Westfold, and their continued march to Edoras. He watched silently from the shadows Gandalf trying to convince Theoden to go to war, when Aragorn spoke up.
"Open war is upon you, whether you would wish it or not."
Caedwyn smiled. He had the king. Shortly after that, it was settled, and the discussion ended. He turned to Bella and Brian.
"Helm's Deep is a strong fortress, but I feel that we are somehow playing into Saruman's hands. I think we are going to need all the help we can get." |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:36 am Post subject: |
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((I just watched the first part of the Two Towers today and figured out where we are.  I have to try and mend my reputation in this SB now  ))
Brenda untied Mist from the stables and walked her outside. The people stared at her, half of them now in a mixture of emotions, one of them being shock. The King of Rohan was free, and the people were confused now from his sudden awakening.
"Oh, I'm sorry," Brenda muttered as she ran into a civilian. The woman glared at her, fixed the shawl over her humped back, and continued walking. Brenda sighed and continued for the front gate. Rohan was not as impressive as other cities she visited.
((Sorry, all I got, seeing as I know where we are I can't apologize enough)) |
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| lol! I will post soon! |
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coraline-
She stared down at the ground for a few seconds then let her eyes wander around the room. It wasn't a particularly wonderful home but it was cozy and compfortable. She was avoiding looking at Aedomir. Could she trust him? She sighed.
"I don't know how to ... I can't ... " she paused and licked her lips. Her mouth was getting rather dry with nerves, "How do I know I can trust you?" she finally managed to say. She waited patiently for his answer concentrating on not looking at him. If she looked at his handsome face she would be all too willing to do whatever he said. |
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(Just thought I'd try to bring myself back in)
Isinaar
I walked my horse through the gates, just in time to see the king's standard bearer step out of the Golden Hall, "By order of the king, the city must empty. We make for the refuge of Helm's Deep."
I frowned. Helm's Deep? Then Saruman's power is greater than we perceived.
Even as the standard bearer finished his proclamation, I heard a gruff voice, "They flee to the mountains when they should stand and fight!" I turned to see a dwarf, an elf and Aragorn and Gandalf making their way to the stables.
I reached the doors just as Gandalf rode out, looking past him and calling out a greeting to Aragorn.
He turned, "Isinaar? What are you doing this far South?"
"Elrond sent me to find out what Rohan's position was," I said, "He had a vision of an army of Uruks marching to Rohan, but could not guess their numbers." |
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>everyone please give this piece some stars please they have all unfaulry been removed.<
~Aedomir~
A horn raged from outside. He hurried out and looked around.
"We ride for Helm's Deep!" Someone cried. Quickly, Aedomir turned back in and gathered his weapons.
"We have to leave," he said to her. "Come! I take it you won't tell me anything."
She didn't say anything, just stood up and scurried after Aedomir. |
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Coraline-
I wanted to tell him everything, not that there was much to tell. I followed him outside and he mounted his horse then put his hand out to help me up. Then it came out.
"I don't remember who I am or where I came from. I'm not even positive my name is Coraline. The last thing I remember if falling and then I woke up on the Forrest floor wet and unable to remember anything." then I took his hand and he pulled me onto his horse. Now he knew my secret, now I trusted him more than anyone else. And now I was begining to fall for him. |
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(Just so everyone knows, Dr. jamie bondage isn't going to be on for awhile. She controlled the two characters Isabella and Brian. I was with them, so now I'm all alone!)
Caedwyn walked back to his temporary home, and packed his meager belongings. A change of clothes, a few more knives and a bow, and his most treasured belonging, a small leather bracelet dyed pure white. He paused, overcome with memories, then walked out of the shelter and toward the stables, toward Amenorin. He was going to Helm's Deep. Caedwyn had a feeling Rohan would need his skills before the war was over. |
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~Aedomir~
Aedomir's face just froze. He had no idea what this woman was on about, or more so, why she was on about it. Was she mad? He said nothing in return, pondering his thoughts.
They both took the horse and moved with crowds out of Edoras. He took nothing with him.
He had nothing. |
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Bella:
I couldn't get the stupid picture of the guy we had met out of my mind. I just could not forget him. my brother sensed I was distracted, but I didn't care. I sighed. Brian looked at me and frowned.
Brian:
"What's wrong?" he asked.
"Nothing." She lied.
He knew better than that. "What's wrong?" He askeed more sternly.
She blushed. "Nothing. forget it!"
He scowled, but said no more. |
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