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To an Unloved Rose.
To an Unloved Rose.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:01 am    Post subject: ^_^ Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tristan-

I lifted the collar of my shirt slightly, looked at Sena curiously. Then i understood.

"Alright, I'll do my best to keep you hidden. Just stay put and see if you can get into my pocket really fast. I'll create another illusion."

"Ok," i heard her say quietly. I made it so that the Lord would not see Sena quickly fly into my pocket. Then i dropped the illusion and started walking off in the other direction.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 6:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sena-

Sena jumped in his pocket and peeked out of his pocket looking around. She spotted the Lord and slid back in his pocket.




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PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 10:22 pm    Post subject: ^_^ Reply with quote

Leo-

Something was happening he could feel it- Rebels. But he dare not tell anyone. He was so bored and perhaps this would bring some fun. Leo stared at his little sister. A sinister smile spread across his face. Maybe if no one saved her. Jasmine would also kill the rebels. The sun and moon together. Taking over the earth.


Jasmine-

The fairy girl ran and ran. Past the village, past rivers and forests. Yet she could not stop. Jasmine had not yet found what she wondered endlessly for- Leo.

But little did she know that he was right in front of her sleeping body- laughing.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 4:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Genevieve-

Genevieve opened her eyes slowly to the new mornings' light. Suddenly, the thoughts of the previous day flooded back to her. Genevieve jumped out of her bed and got dressed. She brushed her hair quickly, hurrying to get to Rai and Gin.

Genevie ran to up the stairs, turned the corner, and stopped at the room Rai and Gin was in. She knocked on the door a couple of times, but when she didn't get an answer back she slightly opened the door.

"Hello?" Genevieve called into the room.

No answer. Genevieve opened the door all the way and found it was completely empty. Just a normal, empty room. She let out a sad sigh. Even though it appeared that they were gone, something told her that Rai was still near by.

Genevieve walked back down the stairs. "Is there anything tha-" weird. The lady at the front desk was gone too.

A note lay on the desk, it read, "Genevieve, would you please buy some detergent?"

Genevieve set the note back down on the desk, picking up a bag she walked to the front doors. But something stopped her, it was quiet...too quiet. Genevieve opened the doors, stepping out into the square. Bad move. Krayan guards everywhere, Genevieve's knee's were going weak.

Genevieve saw Rai standing at one of the corners of the square. A suprised and distressed look was on her face. She gestured with her hand to Genevieve to get back into the inn, but it was too late.

A Krayan officer had spotted Genevieve. "Hey, you!"

"No..." was all Genevieve could say.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 7:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Sorry! I have been away!*

[Finn]

She was so happy to be out of the woods. It wouldn't be a bad thing if she never saw a tree again.

As she clung on to Aedomir, she wondered how long she had been in the woods. A week? A month? More? She had no idea.

It was beginning to get dark so she suggested they make camp for the night.

"Sure. There's a small hill just to the north. We could camp out on that, get a good view of the surrounding area." said Aedomir.

They reached the top of the hill just as the sun was setting behind distant mountains.
"We should sit on the west side, so we are sheltered from the wind."

Aedomir agreed and they found a nice flat rock jutting out the side of the hill.

They lit a campfire and Finn caught a rabbit in a make-shift snare.

Finn lay on her back looking up at the stars."I haven't seen them in so long. The wood was too dense."

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 7:35 pm    Post subject: ^_^ Reply with quote

Jasmine-

A strange tingling feeling swept through her body. A call. Jasmine called out to some one. Some person far away. Who might save her from her fate.

Will some one answer her call?



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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rai-

Rai swore softly as she watched the guards pull Genevieve into the square. There was another girl with them that they just left standing. The girl looked like she was in a daze. Rai stifled the fear bubbling up inside her as she looked over at Jase with a growing sense that events were spiraling out of control.

As if in slow motion she watched his head come up and scan the crowd. Searching for something, or someone. Quietly Rai slipped out of her corner and grabbed Genevieve by the soldier, the girl jumped a foot in the air as she turned towards Rai. With a nod to the shadowed corner Rai let go of the other girl and they started to make their way back to camp, along the way Rai tapped the other girl on the shoulder letting her follow them.

Once they were safely hidden by the shadows she turned to the other girls. "What were you guys thinking? Coming to a testing when you so obviously have power."
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 7:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*I'm confused, so there's you, me, and is there another girl too? Or are you talking to me?*

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

**Has anyone talked to mine and May's people????**

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 1:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*ok kittykat, there's your character mine and maki-chan's at the square right now. if anyone wants to meet up with us they can just show up at the square somehow*
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[Finn]

While Aedomir was busy cooking the rabbit, Finn fell asleep.

Once again she found herself in the woods. She could hear screaming and she could smell smoke.

She ran in every direction as the screams echoed around her, she cried out in alarm as her village came into view. Her mother was cowering on the floor before a soldier, his sword was raised. She screamed and ran towards them but her legs weren't working and no one could hear her.

"Finn? Finn?" Aedomir's face came into focus.

"What happened?" She asked, looking around confused.

"You were dreaming. You screamed."

"Oh. Sorry." She laughed with relief and remembered where she was. "Thanks for waking me up."

He smiled, "No problem."

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 5:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

**Don't let this die!**

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Jasmine-

A light just beyond her glowed a powerful light. Jasmine ran towards it- something took over her, it was almost instinct to run towards it. Hope was inside of it, and Jasmine wanted it.

But when she reached it- She awoke. From the sleep in the cell, put on from Leo. But what she saw was not the real world, instead a nightmare world. Yet she could still move and control her real body.

Leo-

"Crap. She's waking up... Wait what's happening?" Leo whispered.

His little sister struggled to brake free of the chains- binding her to the wall. But her eyes clearly showed she was still asleep.

"Shit. She's sleep walking. Not good. If she thinks something iin the real world is a monster then most surtainly she will try to kill it with her powers."

Jasmine looked directly at Leo. But to her he seemed like a demon that was going to kill her. So she pointed her finger at him and a frozen water bullet shot threw the glass and almost hit him.

"Great. I have to escape." Leo moaned as he ran away.

Jasmine-

"Oh my god. Where am I? There are monsters everywhere! I.I have to get away!" Jasmine screamd.

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