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SishBee
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 Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:03 am Post subject: |
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[Finn]
She thought for a moment before standing up and putting out her hand, "Deal."
He looked at it for a moment then realised what she was doing and shook it. "Come on," he said walking away from her. "My Horse is just at the edge of these woods."
"The edge?" said Finn hopefully, she ran after him, not wanting to believe that it was true, she was finally out of the wood!
As she stepped out from behind the curtain of trees, she had to shield her eyes from the sun. Aedomir was stood by his horse and she walked over to him.
"So, who is going to hold the reigns?" she asked.
"Um, well, can you ride?"
Finn nodded, possibly even better than you can. We used to perform tricks to visitors to tr and earn a bit of money."
He looked a little surprised at this, but then smiled. "I'll sit up front, you won't be doing any tricks with two of us in the saddle."
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| Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:22 am Post subject: |
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~AEDOMIR~
They climbed onto the horse, Aedomir up front holding the reins. "Ya!" The horse shot off, nearly knocking Finn from the saddle. "This should be fun!" he shouted. "No idea where we are or where we're going!"
After a day's gallop south, the hills began to fade away and a great baron field of ash, and sand appeared. "Perhaps we should turn back," Finn muttered into his ear.
"I don't know..." Aedomir said as the horse broke abrubtly in the mud. A short silence awoke, and at length he said, "No, we've come to far."
So they rode further on, wind between their long messy hair. Finn seemed almost excited to be out of the woods. |
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| Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:41 pm Post subject: ^_^ |
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Jasmine-
She stood in her battle stance formation. An ancient water manipulation form of the ancient halfgods of water. One warrior lashed at her, but Jasmine controled the water of the near by lake and formed a tenticle around his sword and snapped it into pecies.
Then Jasmine made the water form a giant fist and puched the warrior.
"A magic user!!! RUN!!!" One man yelled.
The other one ran as well. Jasmine stood thier, hearing the man left behind groan and moan.
"Poor human, your companions left you behind." She pitied him. |
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| Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:41 pm Post subject: |
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Genevieve-
Genevieve walked pass Gin and sat down on one of the chairs. "I escaped from the Kraya when I was young and have lived here ever since. Truthfully I've wanted to be part of the rebels ever since I escaped."
"You could come with us and help defeat the Kraya instead of staying here." said Rai still smiling.
Genevieve looked down. "I can't, no matter how much I want to. I just can't."
"But you just said you've always wanted to." Rai argued, her smile fadding. "Why can't you?"
Genevieve met Rai's gaze. "My mother and father are part of the Kraya." |
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| Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 1:38 am Post subject: |
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Tristan-
I took the apple from her tiny hands, looking it over. Then i shoved it into my pocket.
"Aren't you going to eat it?" she asked, puzzled.
I shook my head and smiled. "Not yet."
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| Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 1:48 am Post subject: |
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Sena-
Sena looked at him surprised, "So you want an apple, to save for later. What do we do now. What do you do out here?" She asked fluttering back up into the air. She twirled around again then sat down getting tired. "Maybe I need to slow down."
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| Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 10:24 pm Post subject: |
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| Some one please bring me in, or I'll get bored and drop out!!!!!! |
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| Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 12:08 am Post subject: |
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| *maki-chan, why don't you show up at the village? That's where most everyone is around* |
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Sena-
Sena looked around, she had heard voices. THE LORD her mind screamed.
"T-the L-lord is coming." She screeched hiding under the cuff of his shirt. "He can't find me." |
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| Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 4:26 am Post subject: |
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Jasmine-
She walked past the man. The fairy girl entered a village.
*all I got* |
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Genevieve-
After a few minutes of silence Genevieve got up and walked toward the door.
"Where are you going?" asked Gin.
Without stopping Genevieve said, "I am probably just burdening you..." Genevieve walked past the door, not even taking the time to close it. "I need to get back to work anyway." she added softly.
Genevieve walked toward the end of the stairs, hesitating before she went on. Forget about your parents! She told herself. Fighting with the rebels will take down the Krayas and the war will be over!
I'll give this some good thought. Genevieve assured herself, smiling slightly. Hopefully they will still be here tomorrow! with that last thought she walked down the rest of the stairs to find her next task. |
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Leo-
He lauhed. The fairy boy was exstremely powerful. With the sun on his side nothing would stop him. He would destroy the rebels and end the war. Leo would rule over the
Kraya with an iron fist.
Leo looked at his helpless pathedic prisoner. His little sister, Jasmine. Everything she was imaginging was in her head. One day she would be at his side, and they- with the power of the sun and the moon will control everything.
" No one will save you." Leo laughed as he left Jasmine in the empty room.
Jasmine.-
The fairy girl ran through the village. She had to find her brother. Leo was the most important thing to her. If he was lost to her then she would die. Die with nothing but dirt and worms to crawl inside of her and eat her rotting flesh. |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 6:09 am Post subject: |
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Rai-
The sun rose on the village in a brilliant blaze of color. But none of the people noticed, the kids were too scared, and their parents were too. Rai stood at the edge of the square, her face was in shadow. Watching the parents holding their shaking children. Krayan guards were posted at all the streets out of the square stopping anyone from leaving. More soldiers escorted other families into the square.
Suddenly Rai bolted upright her gaze flying across the square to land on the Krayan officer who had just walked into the square. He was young, with shoulder length dark hair, and flashing almost black eyes. He held a clipboard in one hand, and wore the crossed-sword badge of the elite guard.
Rai couldn't believe her eyes, Jase was here. But why? He only went on the toughest of missions, why was he at a simple Testing? She could only find one explanation, it was a trap for the Rebels and anyone else. Rai leaned back in the shadows hoping Jase wouldn't see her, hoping Gin was doing better at the lord's manor. And hoping Genevieve laid low for a while, Jase would recognize the scent of a half-god, after all he was one himself, but maybe he'd mistake it for hers.
As all those thoughts raced through Rai's head one thing managed to make itself clear. "We are so, beyond screwed." |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 10:24 pm Post subject: ^_^ |
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| *will no one interact with me??* |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 11:35 pm Post subject: |
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| **i'll try to bring you in at the square in a while* |
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