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Talking_Pinata
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Age: 16
Joined: 31 Dec 2007
Posts: 247
Reviews: 86

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Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 9:37 pm Post subject:

Wow. My jaw dropped at the last line. This was nice too. I love your writing. Wonderful job.

scribblingquill
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Country: scotland
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:59 pm Post subject:

I LOVE the second sentence. Its fantastic. Totally true (I am indeed sixteen, although not adopted...that I know of). I think the ending is the weakest part. The description in the first couple of paragraphs is awesome ^_^.
_________________ i will be a hero. Save the cheerleader, save the world.

strawberry saliva
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Age: 15
Joined: 03 Apr 2008
Posts: 16
Reviews: 1

300 Points

Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:39 pm Post subject:

i just love ur second line. it was pretty poetic. it is really dramatic. i like the way you held the suspense until the very end. good piece of writing.

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