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World disassembled
World disassembled

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the ending was my favorite part, "this is love." ouch.
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Wow Over...

This is amazing!

Other than the few things the others pointed out it looks really great!

Keep it up!
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I liked this poem. Though it's a little scary.I dont want to to happen to me.

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