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 Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 9:37 pm Post subject: |
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Fortunately this story doesn't make any sense any more, so it doesn't really matter what i put down at this point:
fortunately...the snail lost his shell and became a slug. |
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:36 pm Post subject: |
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| Unfortunately there was a salt storm and the slug without is shell was poisoned |
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| Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 4:20 pm Post subject: |
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Fortunately, it provided some good food for a passing crane.
Cranes eat slugs, right? |
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 9:14 am Post subject: |
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i think so.
unfortunately, the slugs, as they were giant slugs had a poison in them. |
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 4:27 pm Post subject: |
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| fortunately,said crane had evolved and had built up a resistance to the toxin. |
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 4:44 pm Post subject: |
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Unfortunately, this meant that the toxic was not used and so this giant stork expanded its kind and the whole world was overrun by giant storks.  |
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| Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 1:35 pm Post subject: |
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| Fortunately, they were nice cranes. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:08 am Post subject: |
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| Unfortunately, the storks became evil because of the toxic. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:41 pm Post subject: |
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| Fortunately, the cranes weren't evil, and they killed all the storks. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:01 am Post subject: |
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| Unfortunately , they discovered that this was a story that we were making and that you have a grudge against Storks. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 1:11 pm Post subject: |
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| Fortunately, they didn't like storks either and decided to be friends with me. |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:20 am Post subject: |
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| Unfortunately, an army of Storks defeated you. |
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 3:34 pm Post subject: |
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| Fortunately, the storks defeated him only in their dreams. |
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| Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:11 pm Post subject: |
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| Unfortunately the stork's dreams came true |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 7:32 am Post subject: |
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| Fortunately, the crows took flight and saved you, while all your crane friends died. |
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