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This was hysterically funny! I love it when people add on or put a twist to fairy tales. This was so funny, because it kind of shows that Prince Charming is a traitor, since he went with snow white, cinderella, aurora, and all of the other fairy-tale-princesses. If you noticed, he really did, haha.
I love it, thumbs up and star for this peice! |
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OMFG!
This was so hysterical!
I'm laughing so hard, I think I'm crying... scratch that: I AM crying!
You are a genius! I love it when the stories are twisted and spun around differently. They give a whole new perspective on what people consider a happily ever after.
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| This was hysterical!!! There were some grammatical errors, but I loved the writing style. My friend is actually sitting next to me, and I told him he could choose which story to read. He chose this one and I'm glad because I still can't stop laughing. The funniest line was probably the one about how Charming now calls her Off White. I would have never thought of that! You did an awesome job! |
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| Wow! That was really messed up! This story was very funny, unpredictable, very demented, and pretty good. But what happens between Charming and Cinderella? Well, anyway, keep up the good (yet messed up) work! |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:25 pm Post subject: LOLOLOLOL |
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OMG!!! I almost peed my pants in laughter! That was a good laugh!
Thanks for that!  |
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“Who the fuck you yelling at?” he said in her face.
“I’m going to leave you.” Snow said seriously.
“And where are you going to go?”
“The same place were I have sex because I'm not gettin' any from you! You are fat. I don't want to have sex with a fat bitch! That is why I leave for some time, so I can fuck other princesses.” |
im a little confused who's supposed to be talking when. the first one is Charming, and then Snow says I'm going to leave u, and then The Prince says where are you going to go? and then Snow says she has sex with other princesses?
im pretty sure you meant for Prince Charming to say that last bit. The way this is spaced or something is confusing.
but other than that, it was really origional, and an interesting idea. Very funny. Good job. =D |
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