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Cry of The fallen swords
Cry of The fallen swords

by Lord Anzius in Storybooks
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 11:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bella--

I sat in the back row of the classroom, attempting to keep my focus on the math teacher. He was so...boring.

Why was I taking high school again anyway? After 632 years alive, I should know all the math I need to in life. But every few years or so I get sucked into taking math classes again....and everytime I struggled to pass.

No deep breathing! I snapped at myself as i had the sudden urge to yawn. It was too late, I had inhaled. There was someone new in the school -- a male, probably around 15, and a necromancer. Yes, his blood said that much. And oddly enough, he smelled amazing.


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 12:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seven yawned. She had no class this period and she sat in study hall bored. Often times they were allowed to go back to their rooms if they had no class, but she was too lazy to walk all the way across campus in the pouring rain today.

She leaned back in her chair, arms crossed. The television was on in the corner...some news program...but she wasn't watching it. She opened her cell phone to check the time not much longer she thought.

Seven's longer dark brown curls were loose around her head, big curls flipping all different directions. Her crystal blue hues were lined with a eye eyeliner and a light coat of mascera. She wore just a pair of jeans and a tank with a dark blue light cotton jacket only zipped at the button. She slid her hands into the pockets of her jacket and waited patiently for classes to change.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 2:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Satika:

Satika sat patiently, wondereing how she was going to make any friends at this school.

I wonder what it will be like here. she thought to herself. steadily she felt the gaze of someone watching her. Man being new at a school seems a little bit scary to me.

Raising her hand, she got up to sharpen her pencil, then sat back down to finish her notes in english.

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(Tamaru is a common dog's name in Japan...just had to say that sorry.)

Tamaru~

Tamaru sat up against the school's brick wall and quickly finished the day's work. Every year the school followed the same work schedule. The only time she had to go to class was if someone caught her skipping or to take a test.

Once it was all finished she got up and walked from class to class dropping off her work and leaving quickly. She walked into her English class with Mr.Hinder and sighed.

"It's so good of you to join us, Miss Tamaru." Mr.Hinder said angrily.

"Yeah it is, but sadly I'm not going to be staying." Tamaru smiled and handed him her papers.

"What's this?" He asked. Tama felt eyes burning into her skin, the eyes of the students that she shared classes with.

"That's the work for today. The suprise test, the short essay. Everything." Tama smiled, pivoted of her heel, and walked out.

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uhhhhhhhh what am I going to do, thought Satika I'll end up going crazy before class is finished!

She raised her hand, "Mr. Hinder."

Mr. Hinder did not seem to hear her. "Mr. Hinder."

Slowly he turned from teh board and looked at her. Ah she had caught his attention.

"Yes Satika?" He asked.

"Ummm, may I go to the bathroom?"

He seemed to hesitate, then replied "Yes you may."

Anxitiously she got up and hurried out the classroom, feeling someone watching her every step of the way.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 10:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Acacia

The lesson was dull. As a result, I decided to skip it. I waited until the teacher had turned his back, then cast my cloaking spell and stood from my seat.

"Miss Briars..." I looked directly at the teacher who was glancing to my right. "Please take your seat, miss Briars." Stupid seating plan. Stupid teacher. I silently left the room. There'd be trouble later but I really couldn't stand to sit through yet another boring lesson.

I headed down to the library, dropping my cloaking spell as I reached the entrance.

"Hello," someone greeted me. I frowned, not quite sure how to react and then decided to ignore it. I walked on, down to the deepest section of the library where I slung my bag on a chair and slid into another.

"I've not been this far before," the person admitted. "Nice place."

"It was."

"You talk then?"

"It would appear so."

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Storm-

Storm shoved his elbow into Slade's side when he saw him watching the girl. He grabbed the note pad and quickly scribbled on it.

Your probably scaring her to death, you freak. Quit staring. Slade just rolled his eyes and looked back up at the board, he could be so annoying at times.


Slade-

Slade listened to teh teacher but he couldn't get the girl out of his mind. Why was she there. He had never been affected by a girl before. He shook his head, and he wouldn't be now, no matter waht he would keep himself from that.

The bell rang after a while and Slade stood up and walked to teh front of the room Storm at his heels. When they walked out of the door he ran smack into the girl.


**Ok, had to cause some action. Very Happy**

Storm (yes again)-

Storm quickly walked past Slade letting him help the girl and deal with things on his own. He walked down the hall way looking for his next class, and maybe something to do. Anythign would suit him just fine.

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Zak-

I consulted my schedule, looked up at the plaque on the door, and sighed. This was the right room, all right. I turned the knob and pushed the door which opened at my touch.

The teacher glanced at me from in front of the board. I hurried forward, handed him my note, and took a seat.

I opened my bag, pulled out all my books, and risked a look at the person to my right. A small boy was furiously scribbling notes on what the teacher was writing.

Switching, i looked to my left and saw a girl that looked about my age staring straight ahead, her jaws clamped shut. She didn't glance at me or the paper sitting on her desk. I looked away quickly and began to listen to the teacher.

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Paige

She tapped her foot against the table leg and sighed. During the class change, she had seen someone that had ignited a sudden fury in her, she thought she might self combust. Her Papa.

A boy had sat next to her, which was a change seen as though no-one sat next to the outcast of the Cabal. Idiots. She growled to herself and gripped the edge of the desk, ignoring the curious glance from her neighbour and wallowing in her rage for a good fifteen minutes.

A paperball hit her head and she flinched, turning around to look the culprit in the eye.

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Seven let out a sigh of relief at the bell rang and she hopped out of study hall, glad to be free from the boredom. She slung her backpack over one should ernad made her way down the hallway.

Seven slipped her hair back behind her shoulders as it was driving her nuts today. Her light blue hues scanned the hallways for people she knew and those like her...just so she knew which barriers were there for the breaking.

Out of the corner of her eye she saw Storm and Slade across the way and headed over to them, walking by their side, "Hey guys!" Seven really didn't care that they weren't witches, she didn't care what they were. She hated this idea that because you weren't the same race you couldn't like each other, it was so....racist. So, she took every opportunity to break the rules. Besides, she had a fancy for Storm.

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***Slade ran into someone else, so he is still back there, it's just Storm right now Very Happy and if you don't like this post just let me know I"ll change it***

Storm looked down at Seven and smiled, "Heya, Seven." He smiled,

"Where's Slade, y'all are always together." She said keep stride with him, he slowed down a little so that she could keep up easier.

"He had a....run in... with someone." He smiled,

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Ow! she thought. She just ran into some guy going back into the room to get her other books.

"Sorry." She said. She watched as he helped her pick up the books she had dropped, when he finished he just stood there.

"Excuse me" She said politly. trying to squeeze by wasn't easy.

After she had collected her other books, she raced out the room, almost running smack into the same guy again.

"Sorry, umm do I know you?" she asked.

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Slade-


Slade stood dumbfounded,

"Do I know you?" He heard her ask, he shook his head.

"No," He quickly got his composer back, "I'm Slade, your new here right?" He asked smiling as best he could. Why was he asking so, odd, he was never like this around girls, EVER.

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Am i new? She thought.

"Yeah, I'm Satika." The smile he had on his face made her melt, as she held out her hand to shake.

Man he has a strong grip. She thought as he took her hand.

"Umm, so soory about running into you." Man could she be any dummer? Pull it together Satika, get a grip. Maybe you can actually makes some friends.

"I know this might be akward, but ummmm.....what race are you?" She really didn't want to ask but he just.....oh what was she thinking, she scolded herself. Now he'll probably never talk to you again!

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Tamaru~

Tama smiled at the girl and tucked the other papers into her olive green bag. In all the years she'd been here she didn't roconize this girl.

"I'm Tamaru. And you are?" Tama stuck out her hand and waited for a reply.

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