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The Ice Sculptor
The Ice Sculptor

by rose_thistle in Dramatic Poetry
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lainey shook her head and followed him out as well,

"Storm, I serious. What are you doing here?"

She stood with her arms crossed. Delainey and Storm had known each other since they were young, though they hadn't spoken much in the past few years some reasons neither of them could pin down.

"How do you even know Kaoli? She's new today. Besides, she has an appointment with me and she is required to stay here all day."

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"Sweet! I get out of school right when I get there, I won't have to face all those questions about my life." Kaoli pulled her gloves on as she ran into the guidance offices. One of the guy's looked up when she walked in.

"Good you're the first one here."

Nodding carefully Kaoli slipped into the room's corner. The mood in here was really tense, like a bomb was about to go off.
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Lunatheria~

Luna stumbled into the office ungracefully. What the heck was going on? One man looked up and scowled. Luna stared at him and sat down in one of the chairs. What happened to Aaron? He was right behind me. She wondered.

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Storm-

Storm ran his hand through his hair again, this was supposed to be easy, but neither of these women were about to give up. He turned to Lainey first,

"I am to pick up some of the kids, unlike you I come here to accutally get them to help their community sometimes." He said putting a serious face on. He turned to the other lady, "I'm sure they will all get here just fine." He smiled, he turned to the two girls that were already there. There were still a few more to go, they better hurry or he was just going to leave them. "Y'all did remember about the adopt a grandparent trip today right? Pastor Nolan was supposed to have called y'all."

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aaron-

A messenger entered the room and handed a slip of paper to the teacher. Mrs. Nunez searched the room until her eyes came to fall directly on me.

"Aaron, come here, please."

Great. What had Ian done this time?

I slunk out of my seat, making my way to the front of the room. My teacher simply waved for me to follow the messenger who was already disappearing into the hall. I hurried to catch up.

Finally, i found myself staring at a small group of people huddled in the office. The messenger gestured to them and departed.

I approached them carefully, knowing only one or two in the group. An older man, no more than 20, looked up at me.

"Oh, good, you're here."

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Luna~

"Yeah! I've heard about it! The Pastor called me yesterday!" Luna half-lied. She had heard about it and she did sign up for it but the Pastor never actually called her.

The door opened and Aaron walked in. "Aaron!!" Luna called joyfully and jumped at Aaron, hugging him and acting like she was still five.

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"Okay, I have absolutely no idea what's going on here. But if it gets me out of school I'll play along with it." I make my eyes extra wide and smile brightly.

"Sure I can't wait for it. This is gonna be a blast." Luckily no one here knew me yet or they'd know I was lying through my teeth.

Another boy walked into the room from what I had heard there were four kids so only one person was left. I mentally crossed my fingers hoping we wouldn't get busted.
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Delainey kept her arms crossed over her chest. She was a little cautious about this, only because she wasn't really convinced...and the kids were such good actors.

She turned to Logan and spoke quietly to her, "Why don't you go ask Principal Kennins if he knows anything about this. It has to be approved by him for a field trip of this kind."

She kept her gaze on Storm. She was not satisfied...he had no paperwork, he did not look professional--it just wasn't right.

"What kind of transportation are you taking to this ... community service deal?" She kind of rolled her eyes and flicked her fingers while trying to decide what to call it. She knew it was a lie, even without powers to see past it. It was poorly done.

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[Logan]

I didn't like following orders, but I did. I went and got the principal and explained the situation. Soon he was huffing and I was following him out of his office and back to the main office. Day one and I was branded as the barrer of bad news. Great. I wanted them to all just go, well that is not true. I wanted them to go and take me with them. I had never been on a time traveling journey to save the world, or destroy it for that matter. I was getting even more jelous of these kids. I smiled to myself at the thought of traveling through time.

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. Logan, feel free to fit your girl right in. Maybe follow them or something. Y'all are making my guy sweat, Razz. Keep it up. Razz

Storm-

Storm gritted his teeth, "We'll be taking the church van, go see for yourself, it's right outside in the parking lot." Now that wasn't a lie. There was a church van out there, and he had driven it there. Though he didn't exactly have permission. The principal soon came in and looked at him just as the last student walked in. So close. We'll get outta here soon. He thought to himself.

"Well it seems Pastor Nolans didn't call anyone." He sighed, "We need to leave soon, the only reason for taking them outta school so early was because the elderly couple we will be helping takes naps in the afternoon." He ran his hand through his hair again. Why did Lainey have to show up, of all people. "If you want you can call him up. I can give you the number." Boss is going to kill me if he has to act like someone else. Ugh, least ways Nolans is a password for just this problem.

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(wow i'm in here somewhere I think . . . .) PWEASE! Someone put me in!

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She rolled her eyes a bit, but realized she really didn't care that much at this point. The principle was out dealing the the situation and now no one could get in trouble for doing or not doing something. Kind of sad, she was bored now. She yawned and leaned back against the wall to watch the situation unravel, hoping it would be more interesting.

"It doesn't matter whether he called or not, it has to be a parents note."

It was highschool, people were ultra worried about skippers and being sued because parents didn't know where their kids were.

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The principal wanted parent's notes, great. It would be wrong of me to do this but if it helped them get out... I told everyone to wait and went into my office. I had to use some of my darker magic, but it was worth it. I congured four notes, with parent signatures. I was pretty sure they were all real signatures. I had to wait a minute for my eyes to get back to normal. The turn completely black when I use dark magic. I had to compose myself before walking back into the main office, I was never the same after using dark magic. I carried the notes in my right hand and marched into the office.
"Sorry I had forgotten that I had the notes on my desk. I guess they were just dropped off in the wrong office." The principal looked skeptical and the other girl, Delainey I think, rolled her eyes and let out a huff. "Now I know what they are for." I smiled sweetly and the principal shook his head and took the letters. He took his time looking through them and when he was satisfied he told everyone they could go. At first I watched enviously as the group marched out of the office, then I did something I would do back when I was deeply under the influence of dark magic. I followed the group. I was intrigued to see what they were going to do. I hated that my parents would never let me partake in my birthright and because of them I was branded a freak. But shit happens and sometimes you just have to make your own way. I wasn't going to let this chance escape my grasp.

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yeah i have no idea where i come in so im just gonna guess......i guess i come in as the fourth kid.

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The mess hall was tidy... for now... and that meant I was out of a job until after dinner so I ditched my uniform and headed towards the front of school. I paused to watch a small group of people approaching a church van. Some sort of school trip? Lucky kids.

"You..." I turned to face the young woman. "I've seen you around, you're part of administration, right?"

"If that's a nice way of asking if I'm a cleaner then yes," I replied, rolling my eyes.

"Yeah, you couldn't clean my office could you? I think someone else was supposed to come down yesterday but they haven't and..." I sighed, nodding tiredly and following her back inside. How boring work was. What I wouldn't give for another mission.

As I followed the woman, we passed several classrooms and the voice of a teacher could be heard from one where the door was open a crack.

"Pop quiz time! Who can tell me who invented the telephone?" I grinned to myself, what a coincidence.

"Alexander Bell," a voice replied drowsily. I frowned. But that was the right answer or rather the old answer which meant the owner of the voice hadn't been effected by the change in time and...

"Incorrect," the teacher said. "Pay more attention, that should have been easy. Can anyone tell me the right answer?"

"Litvia Time," a female voice answered.

"Just round this corner," the woman called and I hurried along the corridor to catch up.

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