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 Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 2:26 am Post subject: |
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Lunatheris~
Luna jumped out of bed and threw on her usual attire. She quickly braided her lond brown and blonde hair and ran down stairs, quickly grabbing a Poptart out of the toaster and saying goodbye to her father.
She hopped joyfully towards her silver porshe. Before getting in she waved at Ian and Aaron. Aaron's hair was everywhere. Luna laughed out loud and jumped into her car. She turned the key and the beautiful car roared to life.
After backing out of the driveway, almost hitting the mailbox, and running over the trash can she finally got on the road. Ian and Aaron laughed as Luna drove off, their laughing faces growing farther.
Angel Falls High School was about eight miles away from Luna's two-story house. Eight miles that she refused to walk. Luna reached up and turned the radio on, singing along quietly as her favorite song played. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 2:40 am Post subject: |
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Delainey yawned and headed to her bedroom, taking a quick shower. She blow dried her hair and adorned herself in a pair of khaki pants and tight-fitting layered tie sweater. It took her no time at all to throw on some mascera, eyeliner and a slight tint of foundation. She slid on some shoes, grabbed her purse and keys, and headed out the door locking it behind her.
She headed down the stairs to her jeep and slid in, making her way to the high school where she worked as the transfer student coordinator. She had graduated from the same school the year before, and it was just a temporary job while she went to school. She would meet with the transfer students on their first say and follow up with them weekly throughout the semester or the year depending on the grade/age of the student and his/her adjustments to the school. She only worked five to six hours a day and made very little, but it was definitely worth it.
Lainey made it to the high school and parked in the teachers parking lot, making her way quickly inside and to her office. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 5:18 am Post subject: |
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I really hope my character is going to be allowed if not i will cry lol jk.. Can I like steal/ call dibbs on Storm?? Jw??
Name: Logan Lane
Gender: Female
Group thingy: Neither-possibly could work as a spy for one???
Age:19
personality: playful yet dark, open yet mysterious, outgoing and loud yet quiet, good yet bad, basically an emmotional mess at times, yet usually very put together..no she is not crazy..darn it lol, she is a good communicator and loves analyzing problems and interoggating people.
history: her father was from the order her mother the gaurd, they met sometime in the 1800's but decided to have their only child in their own time. She was never allowed to join either group because he parents were so conflicting and could never agree. Her parents split when she was 10 and her mom remarried someone retired from the gaurd and had a son. She stays with them both but her father highly influences her. She is pretty lost right now in where she is supposed to be and has run away from her parents to stay in Angel Falls and work at the school as a "peer mediator." (Maybe she bums into Storm here..i dunno =]) She is considered an outsider and freak by pretty much both groups yet she is highly skilled.
powers: can control light magic, can control dark magic, she is kind of like a human calculator and can crunch numbers in her head like crazy which helps with situation anylizaion. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 6:30 am Post subject: |
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Kaoli finished spraying her Cessna plane with the hose just as the alarm on her wrist watch went off. "Great," She sighed. "Another first day at a new school, someone shoot me now." Seriously she was getting tired of moving to a new town almost every year.
Shaking her head Kaoli grabbed her bag by the door, and ran out of the bunker. Putting on her helmet, she got on the black motercycle and sped across the streets towards the school.
When she got to the school Kaoli paused in the front entrance looking around, all the other kids were already heading to their classes. "This place is pretty big, hope I don't get lost looking for the office." |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 7:20 pm Post subject: |
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That is fine with me. May, I hope this works, I couldn’t think of anything else sense I kinda put him a little to old. But maybe this will work. Just tell me, if it doesn’t tell me and I will change it.
Storm-
Storm sat up in a tree watching everyone that came into the school carefully. He had shifted into the form of a hawk and found a good perch up in the tree. He was to watch for anyone that would work as a Guardian.
“Someone else should’ve done this, getting close to the younger recruits wouldn’t be smart.” He hissed to himself. He rolled his neck carefully as some of the younger students came in. Quickly shifting into a better position he watched as two brothers walked towards the school and a girl in a pourche. He laughed, well chirped, when she almost ran into another car. Someone needed to teach that girl to drive. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 8:55 pm Post subject: |
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Ian-
Aaron and i seperated, each headed towards our own lockers. I quickly checked the clock on the wall and cursed. My first class started in less than five minutes. History, taught by Mr. Himboli, was one of the most boring subjects. Having to sit there and be lectured on things i already knew, things i had seen was a torture all to itself.
As i fiddled with my locker combination, i couldn't stop my mind from drifting back to the mission last night. We, my apprentice and i, had traveled back to the times of Julius Caesar and Cleopatra. Our mission had been simple: stop the rug holding the Egyptian woman from being delivered to Caesar and stop him from meeting Cleopatra. And we had succeeded...almost.
Our mission had been foiled by two others, from the Guard. Of course, i hadn't been able to recognize them since they were completely in disguise, except for their eyes. One pair of eyes haunted me, having been the same as my brother's.
I snorted. Impossible. Aaron was not part of the Guard. I was almost positive. But if he was...i wondered what his status was...and better yet, what his powers were.
The loud buzzing of the bell brought me out of my thoughts. I cursed, slammed my locker, and raced towards Mr. Himboli's room. I snuck in while his back was turned, took my normal seat near the back, and searched the room for anyone i knew. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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Litvia
"I wish the uniforms were at least slightly stylish," Litvia remarked as she followed Caecus into the school. He nodded absently, not even bothering to look at the green aprons and hats they both wore. This was a common subject for discussion.
"And what's with the gloves?" she rolled her eyes as she pulled the pale green rubber over her fingers, "it's like working in a surgery."
"Speaking of working..."
"I know, I know. We're doing the mess hall today, right?"
"You are. I'm cleaning out the staff room, see you later." Caecus grinned smugly and waved before turning off down a corridoor. Litvia watched him go bitterly and with a deep, prolonged sigh headed down to the supply cupboard. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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Storm-
Storm slowly walked into the office of the school the message he had gotten on his phone replaying in his mind.
Bring me four Guards from that school your posted at. I know that seems like a lot, but this is a big mission. I need them soon too. Your smart think of a way to get them out of that school. His boss' voice replayed in his mind. He looked at the receptionist and smiled,
"Can I help you?" She asked sweetly.
"I need to pick up a few kids." He replied.
"You don't look old enough to have kids." She replied,
"Thank you for the compliment, but they aren't mine. They are," He thought quickly. "In my youth group. I'm sure you've heard that they were coming out of the school. There was supposed to be a note sent here."
"Who are they so I can look and what are y'all going to be doing?" She demanded sternly.
"Adam, Kaoli, Luna, Sequoyah," Storm said listing off the names along with teh last names. SHe skillfully typed. "We are supposed to be helping an elderly couple. They are the kids in my small group and we have been assigned to it."
"There is no note in the system." The lady replied, Strom acted shocked.
"Are you sure, I'm positive Pastor Nolan sent it in. He said he would. THe parents signed them and everything." Strom replied. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:30 pm Post subject: |
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[Logan]
My name was on the door. That was a new concept. In all the other schools I had worked in the most I got was a cubicle. Not this time, it was right there, on the door:
LOGAN LANE
SCHOOL MEDIATOR
I ran my finger along the the gold plaque. It was kind of nice. The principal showed me around the school and introduced me to a few students. A boy names Aaron, a girl named Delainey, and another girl named Kaoli who looked a little lost. Then he had led me back to my office, a real office! I hab begun feeling better since I left me father. I knew he was looking for me, and so was my mother. But if I wanted to feel sane I couldn't go back to either of them. I had stopped dressing in black, someone told me red was my color once. I laughed the other day and I smiled almost every five minutes. I was pretty happy to be the new Angel Falls High School councelor and peer mediator. I straightened my skirt and sat down in the soft leather chair. The desk was neat and clean. There was a mac computer on the desk. I opened up the internet and checked my e-mail. My inbox was empty as usual. There was a knock at my door. I wasn't expecting buisness right away. But I wouldn't turn them away.
"Come in." The door knob turned. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:34 pm Post subject: |
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Storm-
Storm walked into the small office, the stupid receptionist still wouldn't let him get the kids, he would have to try again, on someoen else and keep the story straight, one flaw and he was caught.
"Hi, can I help you?" The lady behind the desk asked, Storm swallowed hard. He was hoping for an older lady, one that was sweet and easy to sweet talk. Not this, beautiful, young, probably extremly smart, young woman. She would probably see right through him.
"Yes, I need to pick up a few kids." He said, "I'm sure the secritary has told you my reason for it." He said smiling. He relaxed, to seem tence would get him caught right away and he would have to sneak the kids out himself. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:18 pm Post subject: |
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[Logan]
A very good looking young man walked into my office, the kind of good looking that you don't say no to. He wanted to pick up some kids, for a church function. And the secretary wouldn't let him! The nerve. I typed the kid's names into the computer and pulled their schedules up. This school was nice, a little picture of the student popped up next to their schedules. I filled out four passes and got the pass runner, who's name I still couldn't remember, to take the passes to them.
"You can sit down. It will be a few minutes before they get down here." I smiled sweetly and the man sat down in the chair across the desk from me. He didn't talk and kept his eyes adverted from mine. I knew what he was and by now he knows what I am. But what I am is worse than what he is. I'm the outcast. But I decided to ignore the situation and pretend like I was clueless.
"So, what type of church function is this?" |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:25 pm Post subject: |
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Delainey checked her email, a new student was to be coming to her--a girl named Kaoli. She sighed and checked the time, she should be here any time now she thought. She noticed a familiar form in the main office outside her door.
Raising an eyebrow she promptly rose and headed towards the front desk. She cocked her head to the side, "Storm? What are you doing here?" She leaned against the counter top and crossed one leg over the other as she stood, looking a bit intimidating and more professional then she really was. I mean, the students called her Lainey, how professional can she really be? |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:26 pm Post subject: |
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Storm-
Storm looked at the lady, he was sure she knew something of the Guards and the Order, but couldn’t put his finger on it.
“We are going to help an older couple.” He replied, smiling. “Kinda like an adopt a grandparent thing.”
“That is very nice of you.” She replied, He nodded,
“We try our best.” He stood up when he heard feet coming. “I’ll meet them out there.” He replied, That way you can’t ask any questions. He thought, the other wouldn’t know what to reply and that would be bad. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:29 pm Post subject: |
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| [TN, read my last post...I talked to you haha] |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:37 pm Post subject: |
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[Logan]
Oh no you're not getting away that easy! I stood up and followed him out into the main office, making sure nothing fishy was going on. He turned running a hand through his black locks and asked, "Did you need something else?" He was annoyed.
"No, I just want to make sure all of the students get here." I leaned against the high main desk and folded my arms. I didn't know what to make of the situation. I had never really been around the dealings of a member of the Gaurd. My parents had made sure I wasn't involved in anything like that from a young age, despite my powers. I was almost jelous of these kids, getting to go on a mission. I was considered a mistake to all members of both the gaurd and the order. |
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