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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 4:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[You guys are making this hard for me! ahh! well then if she is faling for Riley then she will just relay the false info..hmm double spy..idk..lets see what we cook up.]

[Riley]

It was just sunlight but it was really pissing him off. He glared at the rays shining through the blinds. Sunlight does strange things to vampyres besides just hurting them, it can change their emmotions, make them escelate. He rose from where he was sitting on the bed leaving Anelle behind.
"Where are you going?" She asked when his hand was on the door knob.
"Dunno, need to be a lone." It was happening. he could feel the pain writhing through his body. Soon his darker side would take over completely. He was anxious for this. Because then it would all be gone. The memories, the pain, the happiness, the love. He was ready to forget it all. But he would have to go through the processs first. It was like being resired. You still have a human body but with all of these strange characteristics and new powers. And now that he had eaten fresh blood for a day he would go through it all again. He walked out onto the shaded patio. His human body was begining to reject the blood. It was just the first part. He would go through immense pain over the next few days. But then he would be back to his old self. He would be a real vampyre agian. He spit blood onto the warm concrete and it sizzled because it had come from such a cold chamber. This was all a natural part of the process. The pain wracked and wriggled through his body causing him to fall to the ground. He leaned against the side of the mansion and began screaming involuntarily. No one would come. They knew what was happening. They just had to wait.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 12:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(No one ever answered my question. What's the difference between a vampire and a vampyre? Are they two different types of vampires or is 'vampyre' just a fancy way of spelling the word?)

Ryouku walked over to where Tama was standing. He whispered into her ear, "I realise everyone needs to know the situation, but giving too much information may not be very wise. Say whatever else you need to say to the students, then we can discuss the rest in private."

Ryouku was right and Tama knew it. Most of the things they were about to discuss were private matters, and they were speaking in front of the whole school. They needed to wrap this up quickly so they could think up a plan to solve the situation.

(That's weird, the spellcheck button is gone. You think it has something to do with the site being closed last night?)

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 3:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Ok last night i tried to fit in a really long post to answer all the questions. But, right when i finished my sister flicked the power off! So I'll rewrite it exactly or at least try to.)

Tama~

I knew they where talking to me but they had to give me a second. I was holding my own coversation.

"Dammit Anelle! Don't get in to deep with him!" My mind screamed at her.

"Yeah, okay."

"I mean it. I need you here tonight! Start coming and make sure the info is correct. Be careful though, I can already feel the Riley I know slipping away from my mental grasp. My guess is that he's turning to his darker self."

"Kay. Bye"
Anelle said as if she didn't care.

"Bye." I cut the coversation short and turned back towards the students.

"That will be all. You are all dismissed." I said aloud.

After all the other students were gone I turned to face the newly appointed Protectors. I sent of Darek and the others and stared at the Protectors.

"Follow me." I growled. I walked towards the locker rooms, but before I even got to the door, I snapped my fingers. The small, rusty, red doors disappeared and in their place stood a huge, vine-covered, stone door. I opened it and motioned them to go in, which they did. Tatu's body possesion was going well.

"Sit." I commanded angrily to them, once the large room came into veiw. Velvet and gold chairs where lined up in the middle, in front of those was a red and blue chair, the leaders chair. Making up the back wall was a glass window, which overlooked the entire town. I kicked over the leaders chair and stood in its place as the others took their own seat.

"Let 'em go Tatu." I commanded calmly, knowing that my anger wave was about to wash over me.

"I must say, I never thought newly appointed Protectors would have so many questions and demands! Well for those of you that are impatient and ready to leave, I'm sorry but this'll take a while." I snarled. "How hard is it to come up, grab the shit, and shut your yap for a second?!" I was yelling now and I could hear the anger and authority in my own voice.


"I know we had to talk about it privately! I am going to tell all of you about the Protectors! I will explain the uniforms! And to answer your question, Bethany, Riley already knows who we are! He already knows who you are! And he already knows that we are on to him!" Still I was yelling, daring them to make the tiniest comment.

"First. The Protectors are a group of students who won't age past their teenage years. Their appearance get no older. The Protectors are the ones who protect this town. It is an honor to become a Protectors. Suprisingly, I've had this honor of being leader for twenty years. You all should have the same amount unless you want to leave when you graduate. Some students don't get to leave. Some students have to stay here their entire life!" I said my voice still had a hint of anger.



"Secondly. These uniforms mean alot! You must wear these to public meetings, such as meetings with the President or the Government or simply the Principal. However, if you do decide to wear them other places, you can change their appearace to anything. A bathingsuit, a school uniform, simple jeans and a t-shirt," I demonstrated by snaping my fingers within each change. "while we're fighting you can change these to armour." I changed the uniform into tough, leather armour and back to normal. "All you have to do is get what you want the uniform to look like and snap your fingers. The uniform is stain and stretch resistant. If you do tranform the uniform simply sinks into the skin." I said as I tranformed into a lion and back again.

"Lastly. Mana you will have plenty of time to make a new pact and all that. I need a new summon also. Go home, think about it, then at four today meet me at the swordsmanship arena with your dicision. You have two hours." I tossed them six more uniforms. "Just in case you want to wear them all the time."

"If you have any questions ask me now. If not leave." I pointed the the door that was now open again. Tatu transformed into a cat and jumped on my shoulder.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 8:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sitting in one of the chairs as commanded, she played with her poofy fox tail, which she had not bothered to hide right now.Sheesh, what's up with her? She needs some anger management or something. Rosso chuckled, and Tama shot her a dirty look. Rosso immediately stopped her laughing.

"Well, catch ya later, I guess." She headed out of the room, but stopped and turned back to the group, "I'll be out in the courtyard if anybody needs me. Ry, if you want, we can finish our match from earilier." She winked and headed out of the room.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 8:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Beth:

I glared. I hated being bossed around. Especially by some big protector who acted like she knew what was best for me. I got up and stalked out, fuming. I paused in the door, shocked. "Riley..." I chocked, tears springing to my eyes. I couldn't move, couldn't think. He was in pain...and so of course was I. I was connected to him in an odd way...a way that I had never been before. Before anyone could say or do anything, I was sprinting. I had to get out of here, be alone. I ran, a blur to anyone who cared to look. Faster than lightening, I was over the fence bordering the school.

Once I hit the forest, I felt better, more comfortable. My stomach growled. I hadn't eaten in days. The thirst was uncontrolable. I was starving...literally. I smiled cruelly. At least I had some way to take my anger out. Poison sprang into my fangs, making my mouth water. It was time to go hunting. This was going to be fun.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(I already answered the whole vampire vs. vampyre thing but here goes again: vampyre is the old original way of spelling vampire so that is just the spelling I use, but they are not different so spell it however you want. Umm with in this next post Anelle will be able to leave without Riley seeing because he will be...preoccupied, so she should be able to be at the little meeting, she could actually be gone a few days..those uniforms sound pretty sweet..haha)

[Riley]

He was pulling on the chain that held his arms to the wall. All of the strength was drained from his body but he was still trying to get out. He couldn't control himself right now, couldn't think straight. They must have brought him down to the dungeons during one of his black outs. It was just a safety precaution, he could get rather violent towards anything. He moaned and fell to the floor as more pain swept through his body. The chains were restricting too much movement. He kept pulling, trying to break free; though it would do him no good, he was going to have to go through this no matter what. The concrete floor was cold on his hot bare chest, it felt good. Some of his human characteristics were coming back, like breathing, he had to breathe right now. His breathe came out in huffs as he rolled onto his back and tried to sit up but failed. The dungeon door opened and Sean came in.
"It pains me to see you have to go through this brother. If you just would have stayed with us all of this wouldn't be happening." He couldn't respond, his eyes were darting wildly trying to find Sean in the darkness. Then a blow came to his rib cage.
"But no, you just had to be the broken hearted hero." Another blow to his head, "You had to leave and mess everything up. You know when you left it affected me, more than any of the others. We were at the top of our game, dominating in our world. You were so willing to do whatever to have a good time. Then you got stupid, really stupid." Another blow to his side, he couched and groaned, "You left. Mother wouldn't stop crying, father went on anger frenzies, and I-I felt everything you went through until you were completely lost. I dreamed of finding you and killing you with my bare hands. I hated you. But this," Sean stood over Riley and grabbed him by the face pulling him up, "this is better. Payback's a bitch isn't it brother?" Then he threw Riley back to the gound and Riley recoiled into the corner. Sean just stood there a few minutes composing himself.
"I'm sorry." Riley managed to choke out in a broken voice.
"I just wish..I just wish you wouldn't have been so stupid. But now is your chance to redeem youself. This is your greatest test Riley. Kill them, kill them all." Then Riley blacked out. He knew he would be out for a while but when he woke up he would be the Riley they all remembered.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Beth:

I hurt all over. I hurt physically and emotionally. I couldn't shut it off. It wouldn't stop. My mind kept replaying images...of him, in pain suffering. And even though this was horrible beyond belief, what was worse was that as soon as he recovered he wouldn't be my Riley anymore! Like he was anyways...he probably didn't even care for me. But I couldn't help it. It was like I was...connected to him. ANd I couldn't shut it off! it was annoying! But I didn't know if I wanted to...I missed him. I curled up into a ball on the forest floor and allowed all the pain to flow out, one giant tear after another.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(hey peeps since I cant post for Riley for a while, considering he is out cold for the next few days- can I post for Anelle???)

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(That would be great Rory! Thanks a bunch! I'm switching from first person to third. Writing I, me, and my all the time is really annoying.)

Tama~

Everyone left. No questions. Just left. Tama stood up and stumbled towards the door. To much magic was used today. Way to much. She made the door and the room disappear and the regular locker room come visible. She moaned in pain as she walked across the courtyard and into the dorms, up the stairs, a left turn, a right turn, and into the room. Tama layed on the bed, unmoving.

"I should have helped! I'm sorry!" Tatu cried as she transformed into human form. Jinx jumped into Tatu's arms and mewed as if saying sorry. I smiled.

"It's fine. I guess my old age is getting the best of me 'eh?" I laughed painfully.

"But you are only one-hundred and two. That's not old!" Tatu exclaimed still crying. I smiled and began to laugh.

"Wh-" Tatu's voice was cut short.

"Tatu? Tatu what's wrong?" Tama asked, still laughing uncontrollably.

"Shh! It's Anelle." Tatu hissed sharply. Tama wriggled her way into Tatu's mind to hear the conversation.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 1:36 am    Post subject: Anelle Reply with quote

[Anelle]-sorry guys the italisized stuff is not working!

Hey Tatu, I was able to slip out of the mansion without any problems- guess they all were more worried about Riley than me. I can't be out in the sun too much though-

Just get here![i] Tatu said sharply

Damn it Anelle if you have messed this up! It was Tama.

I havn't I'm coming I'm coming! Jeez![i]

Anelle stuck to the shadows as she moved through the forrest and into the school grounds. It didn't take her long as she could move faster than most creatures but she had to be careful. She had worn a cloak to pull over herself during the meeting in the courtyard. She wanted to get there, have the meeting, then get back. She wouldn't have much to do when she got back though. What Riley was going through was intense, she knew the process. But she still didn't like being away from the mansion too long, someone might notice she was gone. There were already a few people in the courtyard when she got there, including Tama, Tatu..and Beth. She pulled the cloak up over her head and took a seat on the warm grass. She tried to ignore the glares coming in her direction.

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Tama smiled, stood up, and gave Anelle a hug. "Glad you didn't die." She laughed. Tatu did the same.

"Oh. I almost forgot! Bethany! Have you made you dicision?" Tama asked, no longer anger, not the slightest authority in her voice, nothing. Still smiling she walked closer towards Beth and began to laugh.

"I'm sorry about earlier..." Tama still laughed.

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[Anelle]

Now she was confused. They had gone from such anger to laughing? It was all very confusing. She dared a look at Beth. If her eyes were daggers Anelle would be dead, assuming she wasn't already dead and the daggers hit her throught and cut her head off. She smiled to herself at this fantasy. She wanted to meeting to start so it could be over. Anelle wondered what this stupid thing was about and why she had to be here, she was supposed to be under cover.

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Beth:

I glared at them both. "Why did your stupid guards drag me back?!" I accused Tama. "Do you realize what I could've done to them if I hadn't have just eaten?!" I challenged. I glared at Annelle. She didn't want to be here. I snarled. "And why are you here?! How's your new family coming? Or are you too distracted by the gorgeous guy who's 'fawning' all over you?"

Anelle blanched. I smiled, statisfied that I knew this was what she was thinking. I was in no mood to be here...nor was my thirst. "Look, I want to help, but if you don't want any more murders on your hand, I suggest you let me go hunt some more. Unlike some people, I keep my promises." I glared at her again. "so, if you will have someone transfer info to my mind, i'll be off."

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I'm totally lost again...I think I'm going to drop out of this one, guys.

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Tama~

"Good." Tama asked happily. "I'll have Tatu relay the info to you. The best place to hunt is towards the west. In the farthest corner of the woods. That's where the biggest and most blood-filled animals lurk. R-Riley used to go there all the time." She smiled and shot Anelle a glare. She needed not one hint of fighting around her yet. And especially within the Protectors. Anelle knew that exactly.

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