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Flags of Writing
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 Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:15 pm Post subject: Flags of Writing |
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Always try to rhyme,
never stop on a dime,
write all the time.
Never be cruel,
thats the rule,
always go to school.
The flags will wave,
kids will behave,
and all right to the braves.
The flags they wave. |
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| Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:31 pm Post subject: |
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| Not sure I like it, but I enjoyed the spirit behind it. Careful about choosing words just because they rhyme. |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 12:45 am Post subject: |
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| The last stanza confuses me. I'm not sure what exactly you were trying to say. |
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