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Beggar's Dystopia -- Chapter One
Beggar's Dystopia -- Chapter One

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 5:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Could it ba an animal AND an inanimate object? Very HappyVery HappyVery HappyVery Happy

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 4:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

SeraphTree wrote:
Could it ba an animal AND an inanimate object?

Sure, why not. Wink

Four days, including today... should I push it forward a week or two?

So far, the only people who have entered are:
Marionette
alleycat13
1dering at stars

Come on people!!! Sad

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 7:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry about double-posting, but I'm pushing the deadline to the 20th. ENTER, people!!!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Holy crap this is my dream contest. I am so in!!! *happy dance*

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 8:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's my entry: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post299710.html#299710

I hope you like it! Wink

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 11:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks so much, Cat!

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh! Sounds like fun... I might not have enough time though Sad
I will defiantly think about it though!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 2:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I just PMed you my entry! ^_^

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 7:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I hope I will succeed. Cross your fingers!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 7:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you so much everyone!

Fireweed>> I got your entry. Thanks!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

MY ENTRY!

Sorry it took so long!

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 3:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Camille.

So... closes today. Results should be out within two weeks.

So far, here are the people who have entered (if you're not on the list but should be, tell me) :

aleycat13 (Emma)
Marionette (Beer Stains)
1dering at stars (Elephants Never Forget)
cat4prowl (Fiery Rain)
Fireweed (The Ghost of Music)
Wolf (Alphess)
Sam (Chicago)

I don't want to push the deadline again, but I will be accepting late entries until the 25th.

Thanks to all who have entered!

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 5:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mine's the revised "Blue Manhattan". Smile Smile Smile

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, closed officially for judging! I will have the winners up within the next few days.

(I just need to go over it one more time with my co-judge, canislupis)

Good luck, all!
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 4:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Firstly, I would like to say that this contest was insanely difficult to judge. (And I'm not just saying this to be nice--just ask my lovely co-judge, canislupis!) Each of the entries was a true delight to read and was considered for first place. Why did you guys have to make it so darn difficult to judge?! I almost lost sleep, tossing and turning for hours on end at night, for Heaven's sake! (okay, that's a BIT of an exaggeration...)

That said, I will get onto what y'all are probably killing me to announce...

FIRST PLACE goes to Prokaryote for I am Fire (prose) and Gadi for Blue Manhattan (poetry).
I Am Fire>> This was incredibly original and the writing style was really refreshing. The end caught me by surprise and make me laugh. Congratulations!
Blue Manhattan>> This was a really unique way of portraying a city and a very nice poem overall--it would have gotten first even if there were other poems, I promise! ^_^

Second Place goes to cat4prowl for Fiery Rain.
This piece was written very originally and I love the way you portrayed the simplicity of the kitten's thought process without making the animal seem stupid, which a lot of authors tend to do. Good job!

Third Place goes to Marionette for Beer Stains.
The voice cracked me up! Your coffee-table MC is so opinionated and self-centered... and hilarious. ^^

Fourth Place goes to Sam for Chicago.
I really loved the format and style of this piece--not to mention the sense of mystery and the implied background of the girl and boy. I also thought telling it from the POV of a ticket was quite original and effective.

Honorable Mention goes to Wolf for Alhpess.
My dear Camille, I really loved this piece. Your descriptions (as always) were beautifully vivid while still leaving some up to the reader. Your plot also seems very original and intriguing!

Everyone (even those who did not place) should be expecting a critique on their entry. Then, in addition I will give out the prize critiques to the winners--could you all please let me know which pieces you want critiqued?

Again, this was a tough contest to judge fairly and lupis and I had to resort to really insignificant little things in order to not have everyone getting 1st place.

Congrats, everyone!
~Azila~

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