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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah no I hadn't intended it that way. My fault though, I was quite ambiguous *sigh*. I meant human-shape shifter. I guess the line about the cheater makes sense too .If you could delete that line, I'll eventually get around to posting.

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P.S is it cheater or cheetah anyway?

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cheetah. Lol. Sorry, I didn't even realise I was using 'cheater' or that you had for that matter. It's most defineately cheetah though. And now I shall go delete it. Lol.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 8:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

my characters in hong kong and practically every one else is in england or near there. should I change locations.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 1:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nah Sylver stay where u are for now, at least one other person's working on your thread and it'd be bad if all characters came together too quickly before we develop a *quest*.

Well done for whoever made the peter character, but he's way too powerful

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 1:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sylver, just so you know, if you're still reading the thread, you're the warrior im referring too, and Janus will come and get you when you're finished with whoever was sent after. If the person writing for your pursuer has dropped out, do it all from your own point of view.

Guy with the peter/sylar combo: you're basically god-moding. If you're intent on having so many powers, lose a big one like telekinesis (I chose it specifically because I'll be introducing it and it would be better to have varied powers). even if you plan on being the awesome guy in this war of yours, it simpy isnt fair to start with so many powers. If you're a leech, have only one or two (mebbe teleportation, sonic boom and leech itself) plus the super strength you've got, and you might pick up one or two later.

I also hope you talked to Chloe's writer about making her some evil person in the future.

Having said that, if her writer's cool with it, I have a decent idea of how to make it happen.

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P.S sorry for clogging up the thread but i was slowing it down by not posting

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 1:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey!

Sure, I have been trying to think of ways to make her evil, so I am open to suggestions! Smile

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