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Secrets of the Unfaithful {3}
Secrets of the Unfaithful {3}

by Angel of Death in Romantic Fiction
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 6:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kip watched Kimmy the forest child and the man, from the bushes. She was a tiger at the moment and Mystic was at her side. She listened intently waiting for man to answer. Kip and Mystic both began to growl lightly.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 6:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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I sat still, perched on a limb high above the others. I watched, my senses amplified in my feline form, as the scene developed below me.

*Sorry, it's all I've got.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 6:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nic-

My eyes flickered to the forest again where i sensed others gathering. I raised my voice when i answered so they could all hear.

"I am simply passing through."

With all these people around, i sadly decided my scholar form would be inadequate should a fight break out. I debated between two forms and finally decided to become a large black dragon.

"Are you a shape shifter?" the girl asked, the dragon on her shoulder growling.

I shrugged. "You could call me that."

I looked again to the dark forest. "You can all come out now. Your presence is obvious."

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Adri

I scoffed. Fine then.

I leapt out, quickly changing to take the form of a reddish gold dragon, not of the same grand size, but big enough to appear startling.

"Fine, then," I remarked, popping my tail passively. "I'm here in sight."

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 10:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Arianna

Race: Human

Age: 18

Orientation: men

Appearance: Gray eyes with a faint ice blue ring around iris, small slender form, waist legnth raven hair always in a bun to keep it tamed.

Personality: Is always eager to do something fun but stupid, she'll jump out of a moving car into traffic because the driver's being a jerk. She's not good at REAL logic, but she'll kill anybody with her logic. She isn't dumb, far from it. She can speak English French and Spanish and Italian, she had a very high GPA in high school and is now a freshman in Sarah Lawerence. And is very clutzy.
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Arianna scoffed at the cab driver. That gross bastard. She waited until he pulled to a stop sign before climbing out into traffic. She wove in and out of the cars as the light turned green. She stumbled and was foced to pause. Just as she was about to move she was rammed into a car.

Instantly she lost conciousness, and she assumed that she was dead.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 3:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kip stepped out of the bushes and transformed to her normal self. Mystic followed behind her, still growling. Kip put her hand down to silence Mystic as tension began to subside.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 4:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Kira

Species: Vampire- female

Age: 17

appearance: blue eyes, turn purple when she has just turned into an animal (she hasn't mastered turning into an animal,
so she never knows what she'll turn into), pale, blond hair
personality: prankster, smart, curios at every little detail of something, nosy, talkative
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

<King>

King was walking alone in the forest, like usual, when all of the sudden he came upon several people (if thats what they were) jumping out of trees and bushes.

He hid behind the bushes,

"Hmmmm, i wonder what's happening?"

They all began talking, King deciding he had enough of not being joined in pounced on the nearest person.

"HELLO!"

The person yelled in shock.

King sniffed disdainly and grinned saying,

"You need a bath!"

He jumped off and ran to other people,

"HEY MY NAME'S KING! What's yours?" he asked randomly to a girl.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 2:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kip turned around. Even if there was to be a fight she was weak already. She needed to heal herself. Then the thought came to her.

"Do any of you want to join my search party?" She asked.

"Who are you looking for?" A voice asked.

Kip turned back towards the others. "Not a who. A what. I am going to the healing springs in Tieransville." She announced.

"Anyone can be healed. It heals your spiritual powers." Kip looked at each of their faces. She knew what they were thinking. Tieransville was a place where the biggest and baddest demons dwel.

Kip scoffed when nobody answered. "You where right," She said o Mystic " "they are just a bunch of scaredy-cats." Mystic nodded her large striped head and we both walked back through the bushes.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 3:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nic-

I laughed harshly. "Who are you calling a 'scaredy-cat', child?"

She turned back to us and smiled daringly. "You."

I laughed again. "You've got spunk. Not many people would have the guts to call a djinni a 'scaredy-cat' in their face."

I transformed into the black panther again, hair bristling. I sat down after a moment and began licking my paws, watching the rest of them with glittering eyes.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 6:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Oh so you think you are tough because you can transform, eh?" Kip laughed as she transformed into a leopard. She sat down staring at the djinni with mocking eyes. Her body ached terribly. She wasn't supposed to transform when it was so close to her healing time.

"And who are you calling a child?" She asked the djinni. "I may look young but I bet I am older than you."

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I watched as people crowded around the girl who had just stepped out of the cab. What was she thinking? I ran over to the crowd and shoved some people aside. I clenched my fist, trying to ignore my growling stomach. "I'm an EMT, get out of the way," I lied. People scattered off in different directions and the cars started going around me and the girl. She looked dead, but there was still a faint smell of life.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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"You may be older, which i doubt, but i have roamed both this world and the 'Other Place', where time does not exist. I have spent many thousands of years on this world, but possibly only seconds in the 'Other Place', possibly an eternity."

I changed back into the scholar, finding that none of these creatures meant me harm. I watched them all warily, keeping my distance still.

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Allen sat in the corner of the small coffee shop, his nose in his book. He peeked out the window to see a group of people running down the street in fright and terror. He slapped the book close and rose to his feet placing a coin on the table.

Walking out he looked to where the people were coming from. There were to young women in the middle of the road and on of them was on the ground. He put his book in his pocket and made his way to the pair with a thoughtless expression.

With his last step the girl kneeling sung her fist, but Allen caught it. She struggled, but he refused to let go. When he did release the girl was more calm, but didn't take her eyes off him as he knelt down.

He brought his hand to the laying girls face and sighed, "She'll be okay, but she needs treatment." He picked her up and turned, "I'll carry her to the doctors."

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"Ah, very well. I see none of you want to come. That's fine with me." Kip said as she transformed back to normal. She didn't feel to well. She felt weak in the knees as she stummbled over to Mystic. Kip whispered something to Mystic and they shot past the others and towards the healing springs.

After they had ran about one-hundred and fifty meters Kip tumbled off Mystic's back. She dragged her self to the nearest tree, propped herself up against it, and closed her eyes. She could still hear the talking going on between the others.

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