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Here is the second one!
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:05 pm Post subject: |
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These are really nice, canis! I haven't seen your drawings for such a long time, you've gotten really good!
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:06 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks... Hopefully my drawings HAVE improved a little.  At least I'm not drawing stickfigures anymore.
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:33 pm Post subject: |
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Very nice.
They remind me of those films with the single voice. The Narrator and then all the little pictures of cute things... Yah XD
I think the second one is better. It looks more alive! 
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:49 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, I guess you're right about that... well you're a lot better than you were when you were 5 years old! (how's that?!)
I agree that the second bunny is better. It looks more alive and vivid and all that.... so yeah, bunny2 for the win!
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 7:12 pm Post subject: |
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I like the first one best, as it looks more accuarate. The second one is in a better pose, but its head looks a bit squewiff. If you could fix its head, then I'd like that one best, as it reminds me of Watership Down.
Did your dad get you a rabbit? (Since the wolf was out of the question  )
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 7:25 pm Post subject: |
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| He's still deciding.....
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 9:50 pm Post subject: |
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wow, these are good canis, you have the symmetry down, and the shape is perfect. i love these, keep going you definately have a talent.
awesome job.
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 10:11 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks Kim. Any suggestions on how to fix the head?
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| Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:15 am Post subject: |
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Wow.
You're amazing.
(The first one is better.)
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| Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:38 pm Post subject: |
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| These are really good, I like the second one best
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| Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:56 pm Post subject: |
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so cute! I really like your style of drawing. Kudos.
And please let us know if you get the bunny rabbit :p
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| Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 2:58 am Post subject: |
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| Good job. I couldn't decide which one was better. A little cartoony, but still. They were excellent. I hope to see some new bunnies soon.
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