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 Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 11:05 pm Post subject: |
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Meep. Maybe you could crop these so that there's less white and more focus on the rabbits? xD [/sensitive eyes]
They're very cute. I like the detail you put in with your coloured pencils. You did do them with those, right? Heh.
Anyway, my only complaint with the first one is that it looks like it doesn't have a neck. And the second one is pretty good! I can't spot any flaws on that one. But the first one looks a little funky -- I know the angle wouldn't show the rabbit's neck, but it still makes the bunny look weird. I'm not exactly sure why.
Good drawings, though! I wish I had your talent.
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| Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 12:16 am Post subject: |
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Thank you! That was helpfull. I'll work on it!
If I do a re-draw, I'll be sure to post it here.... 
And I'm going to crop it as soon as a figure out how... (I have already cropped it a bit, especially the second one which was smaller.. But I can only do it on the computer hooked up to the scanner, which causes some difficulties. )
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| Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:19 am Post subject: |
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Very nice, both are VERY nice. You did really good. Are those drawn by pencil or what? They look pretty good.
#1 -
I like this one the best. I like the angle and the shape of the rabbit. The position is brilliant too. Kodus!
#2 -
The reason I don't like this one the best is because it is like green. And it looks somewhat fake to me. Not, the best drawing. It is still good, don't get me wrong it is a good drawing (better then me that's for sure!).
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| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:23 pm Post subject: |
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Its green? Really? oh well... Thanks for the review!
I did do it in colored pencils.  |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 1:27 am Post subject: |
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Heya Lylie!
These are really good! I wish i could draw like this! I know absolutely nothing about drawing, so don't listen to these suggestions unless you think it sounds like i know what I am saying;). Actually, you know what? I scrolled back to the pictures to find something i could critique! They are great! What media did you use? Oh, and i voted for the second bunny because it looks more alert...nothing against the other one, but I feel a sort of connection with the second one.. I will expect to see drawings of your new bunny! 
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| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 1:37 am Post subject: |
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| I loved the second one! It looked very inquisitive- like it was about to get into trouble of some sort. Very cute. |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 6:30 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks Grace & kepe! We just finished setting up the bunny cages today... *Vows NEVER to get a non-preassembled cage again*
My hands still have blisters from the pliers. XD..
Thanks for the reviews! I'm really happy... |
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| Oh my gosh, I love bunnies and any other rodent (I hate the name rodent for that group of mammals; it sounds really degrading. Maybe because whenever people call it that they aim to put them down.)! Those bunnies you drew were amazing! I'd have to do it over and over again to get something looking that cool! What are you doing on YWS with that kind of art skill;)? Don't stop drawing (usually I say don't stop writing)! I mean that! I will find any drawing you put on here! My mega hot monkey will help me look for them too. Here it is; 0(o.o)0 |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:33 am Post subject: |
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Ooh, these are really good and you've used the colour well. I think the only thing I can really comment on is the amount of white in the whole picture. Maybe draw the rabbits just coming out from their home, or draw a meadow or something.
An alternative is just to crop them :] |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you soo much!
Summergirl: Thanks for the review. Did you know rabbits are actually from the order Lagomorpha, and not Rodentia? I just found that out.
Ginger: Yeah, I tried to. The second one is a bit grainier, and that's because I already cropped it a bit. The first one I am going to scan again. Thank you for the review! |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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I love these!
The second one doesn't capture my best interests, but no dobut the first is great. The shading spot on and I wish I were that good!
Keep drawing!
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| Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 4:08 pm Post subject: |
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Yes! I got the rabbit. Thank your for the review.
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| Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 11:13 pm Post subject: |
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| the picture is good. It could be darker.-jeni |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:12 pm Post subject: |
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| Awww. They're both really good--and cute. I like bunny #1 more than bunny # 2--maybe it's because it's laying down and I've seen so many plushie bunnies in that position. I'm not sure, but they're both cute and good. You should draw more ^^ |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 1:08 am Post subject: |
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Thanks you two!
Seems as though bunny 2 is winning again.
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