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blacktiger3915
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No, he wasn't served. Nobody was eatin' nothing.  |
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I like the contrast of it all. Serious with a hint of tension in the air, all the way up until the last sentence. Nice.
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Thanks invalidkarma! I like your name.  |
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| This is really funny aha, clever lady.But how is this a story |
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just stole your pickle! Wha hahaha *runs off*
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| Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 10:07 pm Post subject: |
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| oomogggg i bout fell out my seat laughin when i read that last line, girl that was too funny!!!!! |
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