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Down the Drain - Chapter 2
Down the Drain - Chapter 2
by Reuben A in Fantasy Fiction
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Yes, still giving points Cade, I'm aiming to get the count under one hundred if I can, no matter how long it takes.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 1:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Awesome! Still, though, there are a lot of posts that are kind of pointless to answer now, like old contest adverts or even locked stickys that we can't answer. Those could get in the way of getting the count under 100. I know Nate's really busy, but you might ask him about separating unanswered posts into Unanswered Community Posts and Unanswered Literary Posts. Answering every single unanswered literary post would be AMAZING.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 1:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Unfortunately I'm too tired to critique so I'll get started tomorrow. Even if we only do one it still helps. Just you wait, I'll beat you all. (No, I'm not.)

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 2:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
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It's one of yours, Cade ^.^
Forgive me if it isn't a very helpful review--poetry is not my forte. But I'll try! Razz

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 6:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
You're right Cade but I'm determined to get it down as far as possible and thanks for all your help, it means a lot to me.

Thank you Piepie, you're right, if everyone did one there would be none left to answer.

Thanks for the help Ayra =)

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Thank you Via! Points are on the way and I also owe you a critique.

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I'm suddenly addicted...

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
A link. The poem was posted the other day, but I had a bad feeling about it. I had a poem that was critiqued once, and it wasn't helpful. You can say I prevented an unanswered post.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic22581.html

Sorry, I put this in the wrong place. Here you go all the same.

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Thanks everyone, I just finished donating the points and for those collecting credits, I will post your totals on the storybook.

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Thank you! Let me know what you want critiquing.

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