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Thanks! 
And yeah, you did comment on my 'A Winter Midnight'. 
I'm working on getting rid of some of the description, but I can't add any dialogue. I mean, who's she gonna talk to? The demon? 
Anyways, thanks to all of you guys for your input!
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