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BigBadBear
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 Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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"Trick or Treat!"
lol. As you can guess, it happens on Halloween night. Everyone's sentences are so good!
To read my prologue, go to my blog in my siggy!
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| Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:41 pm Post subject: |
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After living a hundred and forty two years in the body of a seventeen year old with a two hundred and eighty four year old in the body of a seventeen year old, Pen longed for more.
^.^ very long, yet not a run on! |
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| Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:59 pm Post subject: |
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When the Sindrykans came, everyone knew.
I honestly couldn't think of how to start, lol.
Not as good as the one I used last year, but then last year's was a dare... |
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| Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:26 pm Post subject: |
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Regan blinked.
Exciting, ain't it? |
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| Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:48 pm Post subject: |
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In the early morning hours, a new life was being brought to the planet. In the town of Zeinta, Scado and Lethero were being born by their mother, Nicarga.
Not exactly one sentence, but that's basically how my prologue begins. |
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| Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:49 pm Post subject: |
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| History began to change as the fifteen scrambled-looking people filed into the train depot, holding scarfs to their necks as a lazy wind rolled by. |
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| Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 11:33 pm Post subject: |
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I rambled about quotes in my El Jay, so I'll spare you:
William was eating lunch when he died.
I love NaNo. XD When else would this be acceptable...? Never, that's when.
EDIT: For D-
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:31 am Post subject: |
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Smaur, Suzanne--- wow. Just...wow.
The sidewalk is splattered with a cat’s body, still fresh days after the accident.
It is basically nothing about the story, just an entrance to the setting.
The first sentence of real story is “It’s a wonder how cats move from life to life so fast,” Neta told her grandson. |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:39 am Post subject: |
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Sam, I love yours! XD So randomly funny! (although I'm sure it's not so random once you get into the story... *shuts up*)
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:40 am Post subject: |
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I feel like a loser...
The sun rose over the hills of Sparkston, a small town in the Midwest. |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:46 am Post subject: |
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Mine's not all that spectacular.
On a hill beside a shimmering lake, there stands a manor. |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:58 am Post subject: |
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I like yours, WD. It sort of lulls me into wanting to listen, with just a few words.
Sambo... you are, of course, my hero. XD |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 3:44 am Post subject: |
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"Is it on?"
In all its fantastically wonderful three-word speechy glory!
...Speechy? O.o |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 4:16 am Post subject: |
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| Hahaha. The best three word liner EVER! |
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