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alleycat13
Now a working, tax-paying citizen Novelist

 Gender:  Age: 18 Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 332 Reviews: 95 Country: USA, in the middle of a mitten 319 Points
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 9:14 pm Post subject: |
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| I PMed my entry to you! |
_________________ Calvin : You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes : What mood is that?
Calvin : Last-minute panic.
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Kylan
how superior. Master of the Forum

 Gender:  Age: 16 Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 1075 Reviews: 263 Country: USA 300 Points
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 12:37 am Post subject: |
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Okay. As of yesterday this contest was closed. Thank you Via and alleycat for submitting your entries on time.
However as stated in the original post, unless at least four people entered, the contest would be a no-go. So here's the deal. I will critique the entrants submissions and informally critique other pieces if they'd like me to take a look. No formal prizes will be awarded. I'm sorry you two, you probably put a lot of work into your entries. But, such is life.
I hope to see you all around.
(By the way, both of your submissions were superb. Via - your story was playful and well planned. Alleycat - your story was emotional and thoughtful, drawing heavily on a combination between heart and mind.)
-Kylan |
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alleycat13
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 2:52 am Post subject: |
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Darn, no prizes Just you and me, Via. Oh well.
I'm glad you thought it was "superb", and, even though it didn't quite work out, thanks for giving me some motivation to write, Kylan.
I think I'll post my entry in the Other Fiction section so other people can critique it too.
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