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The Ballad of the Trees
The Ballad of the Trees

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 3:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

7/10
I like that song!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 3:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

7/10

I like the tempo and the beat of that song

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You're the angel that is listening. Your soul a hallow gold bleeding silver splendors from your crimson lips.
I kiss your wings and hope you're mine to stay upon the rooftop of my dreams. And here you are, the angel that is listening-Me

8/10
Vivid and pretty =]

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

7.5/10 I didn't really get it but the parts I understood were funny.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

very cool.
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that is....cool. kinda hard to explain, but i understand the meaning, and I think it is cool. (sorry, i like that word)

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

very cool.
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that is....cool. kinda hard to explain, but i understand the meaning, and I think it is cool. (sorry, i like that word)

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

.....oh wow x_X 7/10

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

5/10
there's a typo...

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 9:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

8/10

Boo-yeah.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 2:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

7/10

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

7/10
I like the second one, but the first - the Bee Movie was strange. o_O

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:51 am    Post subject: teehee Reply with quote

10! I have bizzare celebrations all the time! There the best kind of celebrations!

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 9:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

4/10

It needs to be spaced out better. It looks like it's Bob Marley who said all that and like it's part of some weird song of his that quotes Gandhi. Confused

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 6:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay for the Epic!

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 6:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

7/10. can we post anything except picking on the french? i think that's sort of been a bit overdone.
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