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October Girl
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 12:16 am Post subject: |
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| ooooooooh I looooove it!!! 9/10 |
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Commando588
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 3:09 am Post subject: |
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makes me sad... but a good 9/10... |
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Sometimesinbetween
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 3:09 pm Post subject: |
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7/10  |
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October Girl
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 3:12 pm Post subject: |
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so true 10/10  |
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ambercoultis
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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| 8/10 were have I heard the crash and burn thing before?... |
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blacktiger3915
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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| 6/10 It's pretty good. |
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gyrfalcon
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 5:24 pm Post subject: |
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| 6/10 Meh. |
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Esmé
consider rephrasing Master of the Forum

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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 5:35 pm Post subject: |
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| 9/10 Matches my current mood, and is so beautiful. |
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This_is_history
Novelist

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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 5:44 pm Post subject: |
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9/10 Funny. |
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Fireweed
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 7:50 pm Post subject: |
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9/10 I think I already rated that one. Yeats is always beautiful.
6/10 Pretty overused, but true anyway.
8/10 That's pretty... what is it from? |
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This_is_history
Novelist

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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 7:55 pm Post subject: |
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50/10! That's gorgeous! Did you write it?
And the last one in my sig is from This is the child, my poem. Thanks for saying it's pretty!  |
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gyrfalcon
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 8:13 pm Post subject: |
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7.5/10
quite pretty |
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This_is_history
Novelist

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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 8:16 pm Post subject: |
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10/10. My favorite song off that soundtrack.
And thank you!  |
_________________ I have spread my dreams beneath your feet. Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.
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blacktiger3915
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 10:09 pm Post subject: |
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| ohhh.... I like this one. 10/10 |
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TL G-Wooster
if your guts have holes in, don't worry. Epic Novelist

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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 12:46 pm Post subject: |
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6/10
Okay. |
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