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Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 5:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
5/10 Does do.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 5:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I was with you up until the metal pipe and the shoe. The birdies are a little more sinister than that. 6/10.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'm gonna go with 4/10 because my math teacher last year beat that into our heads and now I really don't like variables.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 2:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
8/10 ossim

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
er dont really understand it
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 5:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
6/10

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
4/10

It sounds like a long advertisement.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
It basically is. Smile

8/10 because I like it.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
5/10 An advertizement?

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
lol, that's awesome. 8/10

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 1:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Shakespeare??? D:

Sorry. 3/10.

You need a quote from someone awesome like...I dunno...me! Smile i'd give you a 10/10 then.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 1:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I would give you a 0/10 for saying Shakespeare isn't awesome, but I'm rating quotes so I'll let it slide this one time!

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Because I agree with the cliche thing. Very Happy

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8/10 because that's what I gave up last time.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 9:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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