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TL G-Wooster
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8/10
Cool. Makes me want to look up the song it's from.  |
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| Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:04 pm Post subject: |
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| 7/10. Heh. Quite funny. |
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| Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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not much there...
21/2-10 |
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TL G-Wooster
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:46 pm Post subject: |
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1st: Meh, it's all right. 2/10 for the arrow.
2nd: 4/10 He should walk away if they don't believe. He's just wasting his time otherwise. |
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*singerofthenight*
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:48 pm Post subject: |
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9/10
lol funny |
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:51 pm Post subject: |
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| Um, what? That's just random. Are you obsessed with pickles or something? 3/10 |
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:53 pm Post subject: |
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| yes. omg! your evil 8/10 evilness rules! |
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TL G-Wooster
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 4:09 pm Post subject: |
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5/10
Too many exclamation marks, but big points overall. Nix the caps and marks and it'll score higher. |
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:42 pm Post subject: |
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| Funny, but the names mean nothing to me. 7/10. |
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 11:50 pm Post subject: |
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| TL G-Wooster wrote: |
1st: Meh, it's all right. 2/10 for the arrow.
2nd: 4/10 He should walk away if they don't believe. He's just wasting his time otherwise. |
its a song about God so I hope he doesn't walk away
and for the above siggy 6/10 |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 3:22 pm Post subject: |
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If it IS a song about God, than he SHOULD walk away from those who don't believe. Because they probably don't want him pushing his religion in their faces, as Christians are wont to do.
Plus, my mind keeps hearing:
Sheeee's not the cheatin' kind
But she's been cheated one too many times...
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| Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 4:40 pm Post subject: |
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1/10
i hate math |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 4:47 pm Post subject: Heh. |
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1/10.
Sorry 
It was slightly immature. |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 5:57 pm Post subject: |
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ummm
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| Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 6:35 pm Post subject: Heheh |
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