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you kill me
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It's called a Pensive. : P

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9/10 funny

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10/10 ouch logic.

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LOLLOL!! 20/10!

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I already said it but 10/10!!!

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10/10!! So cool!

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
very poetic Smile 8/10

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10/10 awesome! The last one is really awesome too! The first one is intense!

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10/10 magical!!!

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Pretty colors. *Mesmorized* (sp?) 10/10

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LOL, so true! 10/10!

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
8/10 Thought provoking.

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8/10

Lolish, but not as funny as your others.

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Extremely accurate. *hates on Batman*
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 3:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Extremely poetic. But it does get cliche near the end. I like the idea of saving time in a bottle, though. 7/10.

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