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Areida
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| Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 1:18 am Post subject: |
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Wow... that's hilarious!!  So whatever happened to the rest of FREAK? Is it ever going to acutally get published?
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| Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 5:41 am Post subject: |
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| yoha_ahoy wrote: |
Wow... that's hilarious!! So whatever happened to the rest of FREAK? Is it ever going to acutally get published?
~Yoyo |
... after finals, I'll submit it in. Really...
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| Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 5:54 am Post subject: |
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I love this!
Its so funny! It has inspired me to write something! 
I lobe how Random Guy 2 keeps on coming back to life!
Keep writing! |
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TL G-Wooster
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| Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:27 pm Post subject: |
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Lol, that was so funny!
Random Guy 2 and Man With No Name were the best, especially Random Guy 2, never dead.
And, did I mention, ? |
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 4:32 am Post subject: |
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HA!!!!!
RANDOM GUY 2!!!! the first time he kept on talking, i was like isn't he dead?
GREAT PLAY, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT!
......hey would you mind us acting that out?
not as proffesionals or anything just for fun? |
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| Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 10:00 pm Post subject: |
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this is hilarious.
hehehehhehehehehehehe
*laughs some more
it was great
good work |
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Teh Wozzinator
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| Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 9:29 pm Post subject: |
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XD XD XD XD Amazing!! Hilarilous! *insert a bunch of other adjectives with exclamation points!*
I have no edits!
Great job!
Et cetera!
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| Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:07 am Post subject: |
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Just by looking at the title I knew I would love this.
and,
It made my day (: |
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| Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:38 am Post subject: |
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Hi,
Extremely Hilarious! I have never read anything quite this funny before. I have to admit that when I first started reading it, I thought it was a bit strange, but now I think it's wonderfully unique.
I didn't spot anything wrong. It was very well done, I'm still smiling thinking back on it.
The ending was my favorite part
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CAROLINA
Ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She guns down everyone with a machine gun and then runs off, leaving a pile of mangled bodies. She kills everyone except...
RANDOM GUY 2
I’m still alive!
DANNY
Shut up!
Suddenly, in another wonderful example of deus ex machina, the AUTHOR makes a 100 ton unicorn fall on everyone, killing DANNY and RANDOM GUY 2. Two other people emerge from the wreckage though…
PEARL
Where are we?
CHRISTIAN
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It gets me every time.
I also liked how to title had nothing to do with the story. It was a very RANDOM piece.
I loved it!
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| LOL!!! I loved it! Too funny! And judging from your Leopluridon thingy, you saw/ made the Charlie the Unicorn thing on youtube.com! I love that video! It rocks! "It's gonna be an adventure, Charlie! Adventure!" "Candy Mountain! The land of sweets and joy and joyness!" Yay magical Leopluridon, Charlie the Unicorn and his freaking kidney XD!! |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:18 pm Post subject: |
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This is hilarious!!  ) |
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