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Erilan looked at Yeron.

"Like...the army?" she asked. "Do they accept women. My grandmothe taught me how to fight and I don't have anything left to do really." She muttered.

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Georgia saw the berracks and sped up. She was tempted to shift into wolf fourm but then she would lose her bow. Out of the corner of her eye she saw Yeron and Erilan.

"Yeron!" she called and ran over to them.

"Yes Georgia?"

"I want to join the militia."

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"Why do you want to join the militia?" I asked.

"My own reasons," Georgia said. "Now can I please join. I'll be an archer."

"Well, I guess. Go to where the targets are early tomorrow."

"Thank you, Yeron."

"That is thank you sir, as long as you're in the army. I don't care if you're magical or not. If you're in my militia you will adress me as sir. You will obey any of my orders and you will sulute with a fist to your heart when you leave."

Thank you sir. Yes, sir." Georgia put her fist to her heart and walked off.

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She couldn't help but smile, her grandmother wouldn't be able to fight anymore, but that problem wouldn't be short on her. She felt the need to practice some more.

When she reached the targets she knew Yeron was watching her, and he probably knew she knew. Each arrow hit dead center.

"Impressive," he said.

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Shadalina snuck(?) up behind yeron. She watched him for a moment to make sure he was not tense and then wipered "boo".

he stood verry still for a moment, and then said "Smart idea going down wind. Do you know how to fight." With that he spun arround was about to spar her, when he noticed that she had already changed into her human form, with leather armour, and a dagger in each hand.


"Would you like to join the millitia" yeron asked.

"that is what i came to ask you, so, of corse I will gladly join. I am good at sneak attacks, spying, and basically all stealth." she told him, narly a notch higher than a wisper.

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Erilan sat on the edge of a well and looked down. It was the deepest well in the village and the one used the least. She picked up and rock and dropped it down. Listening to it drop. She didn't hear it hit any water. She leaned in and looked down. Her foot slipped and she fell over the side, into the well.

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Alje watched Erilan fall into the well and ran over.

"Erilan!" she yelled. She turned into a dragon and plunged in, praying that it wasn't too tight. Perhaps the gods heard her, because she was able to dive down and catch Erilan just before she hit the bottom. She grabbed the wall with a claw and hung there.

"Hold onto me." Alje instructed. She felt the girl grab onto her spikes and let go of her with her claw. She began to climb up the well, which wasn't easy. After a few minutes they emerged at the top and Alje set the girl down.

"You alright?"

"Yes, i think so." the girl said, a little shaken.

"Good. next time, don't lean so far." Alje said, smiling slightly. The girl laughed softly.

"You guys alright?" Lethero asked, standing next to them.

"Yes, we're fine." Alje said.

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"How much time do i have to wast here!!" hissed Eagle
"You have to Wait until the corporal comes here" replied a solder near him
"Well tell him to hurry up" snapped Eagle
"Are you mad? I'd be thrown out of the militia" said the soldier
"Well isn't that better than being dead?" asked Eagle pulling out a knife
"Don't you dare" hissed the solder pulling out his sword
The solder jumped at Eagle, but Eagle just side stepped it and kept his knife at the solders neck.
"some of you humans are so weak i didn't have to use my powers or my sword." Said Eagle smiling then added "get your corporal here i want to join the militia!!"
After the shoulder left Eagle said " then again some of you humans are so selfish and strong."
Eagle touched a scar on his face given by a human who had murdered his family.

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* I am changing charater but i would like to be part of this SB*

Name:Halina
Gender:Female
Race:Human
Age:19
Apperance: Tall and slim with black hair and brown eyes. Wears all black with a single emerald locket.
Weapons: Long sword, dagger and bow.
Abilities. Exceptional fighter and a very good thief and pickpocket.
History: Her parents had been killed ina fire six months ago and Halina had been travelling ever since. Nothing else is known.

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Halina walked forward nervously and stopped the man walking towards the barracks.

'Excuse me, sir' she said stepping infront of the man.

'Yes?' he asked.

'I would like to see the leader of the Militia. Do you know where i can find him?'

'You've found him'

Halina froze. A werewolf was incharge of the Militia! She tried to hide her suprise and hastened to ask him what she needed.

'I would like to join the Militia' she replied keeping her eyes downcast.

'Come with me,i am going to the barracks now' he said and stepped past her walking away.

Halina followed close behind deep in thought.She was so close to finding him. After everything that had happened Eagle was within her grasp.

*Hope that's okay. I can't wait to see how big this one gets!*

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"So, you're the corprol," the guy named Eagle asked when I stepped into the barracks.

"Yes," I replied, "I am Corprol Yeron, heir to the Blood Paw Pack."

"So you're a Werewolf."

"Does that surprise you?"

"I never thought humans would trust a Werewolf to their army."

"My grandfather is Lethero, they trust him. So you want to join the army."

"Yes."

"Ok, let me get a few things straight first."

"I am your superior. You will call me sir. Anyone who has a higher rank, human or not, you will adress them as sir or by their title. You will follow any order given to you by any superior.

"A superior is represented by a weapon. Corprols have a claymore. Captains have Scimators. Luetenants have longsword. Everyone else carries a shortsword."

"Do you got that Eagle?"

"Yes."

"Yes, what?"

"Yes sir," he answered relunctantly.

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Erilan and Alje talked for a bit. Erilan was really starting to trust her. Could she actually have another friend out here?

"So what's the deal with the Militia?" Erilan asked. "I mean, why does everyone want to join it all of the sudden?" Alje looked surprised that Erilan even cared.

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"I dunno." Alje said, evading the question slightly. Then she added, "I for one dont want to join. Sounds boring. I'd much rather just fly around breathing fire at anything that threatens me."

Erilan laughed. "I don't blame you."

"So...are you in the militia?" Alje asked.

"I'm trying to get in. Just to give me something to do."

"Pretty dull around here?"

"Hell yeah."

*i cant think of anything else*

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"I don't really know if I could handle calling Yeron 'Sir' though. I mean, we aren't exactly close, but I grew up around him. I don't know if I could do that." Erilan said.

"I could never call him 'Sir'. He's a youngin' and my friend's grandchild. It would creep me out to no end." She laughed.

"I'm scared about my dad though. I want to know if he's alright, since he said he went off the the militia. It's been a whole year since I got a letter from him."

"I know you must feeled worried."

"Do you think I should join? Im pretty good with weapons, since my grandmother tought me."

"Ooh! Tought by the great Telayna eh?" She smiled.

"Haha yeah."

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"Youngin am I," I said walking up to Ajle and Erilan. "I may be just barely an adult, but I'm the best person in the Militia."

"And I've been around longer than you, and I know magic," Ajle said. "Besides have you ever been in a real battle?"

"Well, I fought against people who disturb the peace."

"Have you ever fought in a real battle before?" Ajle asked again.

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When dawn rose in the sky Georgia rose like clock work. She donned her gown and weaponry before running as fast as she could to the berraks.

She was so excited that she thought she wouldn't be able to shoot a straight shot. She filed into line with the others while they waited for their turn.

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