Topic ID: 17963
|
View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
Alice
Disaster Zone
Writer of Legend
Gender: 
Age: 14
Joined: 28 Jan 2007
Posts: 5132
Reviews: 259
Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here
247 Points
|
 Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:17 am Post subject: |
 |
|
Georgia put the sword back in its scabord and followed after him, the sword hitting her leg as she ran. She pulled the hood up over her head and pulled the side facing Yeron back a bit so she could talk to him. The sky was growing dark and Georgia looked up at the sky.
"I wonder what I'm supposed to do exactly," she mused. |
_________________
I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
ELven-Maiden
Mars. is. Fricken. Awesome. Hands down. GO MARS!!
Novelist
Gender:
Age: 14
Joined: 27 Dec 2006
Posts: 425
Reviews: 52
300 Points
|
| Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:05 am Post subject: |
|
|
Gera dropped out of the trees above Yeron and landed right in his path, landing like a panther. Yeron insticntively took a step back and touched his sword.
"Gera, don't ever do that again," he said sharply. "Next ime I might take off your head before I know who you are."
Gera raised an eyebrow and glanced him up and down. "You're touchier than before, sir," she commented calmly. "Something wrong?"
"Hell's broken loose," Yeron replied with a scowl.
"Ah," Gera said simply.
"Where have you been?" Asked Yeron.
"I was in the city when I noticed--" she stopped short as she saw Georgia shift behind him. "Who's that?" she snapped.
"Relax," Yeron said. "She's not an enemy. In fact, it may very well be her who will end this. You were saying?"
Gera scowled, but she continued with her story. "I was in the city when I noticed that a group of men 'happened' to be at the same bar at the same time. I decided to take a closer look and followed one home."
"You have no right to do that without my order."
Gera shrugged, her face impassive, and went on as if he had not spoken. "I found out where he lived and waited for him to leave the next night. when he was gone, I slipped into his house and--"
"Gera!" yeron snapped. "The militia is to protect the peace and the law! We did not have any right to search these people!"
Gera scowled. "I guess I'm a thief, now, Corpral," she snapped. "You can jail me or put me in stocks or whatever you do to thieves, but before you do, you might want to see what I found in the basement." and before he could retort she swung a pack from her shoulder and spilled it onto the ground.
Yeron bent closer for a better look, but Gera was naming off the contents in case he couldn't see in the darkness.
"Werewolf teeth, nymph scalp, dragon talons, firedrake scales, a druid's ring (with the finger still attached), a gryphon's beak, and vampires' fangs."
Gera sat back and smiled coldly. "But I'm a thief now. Why believe me?" |
_________________
Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
GO HORACE!
I have some IA on Venus, but I don't know how long it'll last. my com's getting crushed.
"Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you."~Carl Jung, psychologist and psychiatrist. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Firestalker
Prince Of The StoryBooks
Novelist
Gender: 
Age: 14
Joined: 11 May 2007
Posts: 498
Reviews: 70
Country: Srilanka
1710 Points
|
| Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:34 am Post subject: |
|
|
*Yikes*
**Yes i am still watching this. Ash told me what's going to happen so i will start posting soon again** |
_________________
The Prince of the storybooks comes,
Starting the inferno of fire,
And stalking death itself,
Firestalker is back
To rule and destroy |
|
| Back to top |
|
Alice
Disaster Zone
Writer of Legend
Gender:
Age: 14
Joined: 28 Jan 2007
Posts: 5132
Reviews: 259
Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here
247 Points
|
| Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:45 am Post subject: |
|
|
Georgia stepped up next to Yeron and looked at the assortment.
"Putting all this together would make one killer spell, and I mean that literally." She moved her hand foward and shifted them a bit. "Thats what they were going to do with it too."
"Should we keep the things then?"
Georgia nodded, "absoloutly." |
_________________
I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
|
| Back to top |
|
ELven-Maiden
Mars. is. Fricken. Awesome. Hands down. GO MARS!!
Novelist
Gender:
Age: 14
Joined: 27 Dec 2006
Posts: 425
Reviews: 52
300 Points
|
| Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:25 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| "I don't care what they were going to use it for," Gera snapped, her eyes flashing. "Nothing here is from a human or an animal; just mythical creatures. It's disgusting!" She closed her eyes and took a deep breath to calm herself. "At least it was for a spell. When I first saw them I thought they were distrubing trophies of some sort. It made me sick." She opened her eyes and was once again calm, thinking. "Who do you think they were trying to kill?" |
_________________
Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
GO HORACE!
I have some IA on Venus, but I don't know how long it'll last. my com's getting crushed.
"Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you."~Carl Jung, psychologist and psychiatrist. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Boon
Lone Wolf
Speaker of the Forum
Gender:
Age: 15
Joined: 21 Feb 2007
Posts: 709
Reviews: 102
Country: Heaven wouldn't accept me and Hell was afraid I'd take over.
300 Points
|
| Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:02 pm Post subject: |
|
|
"Well," I said, "being a Werewolf, I know that a Werewolf Tooth can kill a vampire. A Druid's Ring can still contain a hint of magic. What it's all for I have no clue."
"What about you Georgia?" Gera said. |
_________________
Your life is yours alone. Rise up and live it.
-Terry Goodkind, Sword of Truth: Faith of the Fallen-
-DragonFireAsh- |
|
| Back to top |
|
Alice
Disaster Zone
Writer of Legend
Gender:
Age: 14
Joined: 28 Jan 2007
Posts: 5132
Reviews: 259
Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here
247 Points
|
| Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:46 am Post subject: |
|
|
"Werewolf teeth, nymph scalp, dragon talons, firedrake scales, a druid's ring a gryphon's beak, and vampires' fangs." Georgia mused, "nymph scalp is a very powerful aphrodisiac, dragon talons are harder than the scales, firedrake scales-in the state these are in- would burst into flame if they came into contact with water, the druids ring, with the finger, probably holds more magic than the rest of the stuff combined. Vampire's fangs could easily kill a werewolf, probably easier than silver could."
They both looked at her surprised.
"I paid attention when my grandmother taught me these things." she turned back to the stuff, "whoever collected these defiently had intent. If you put them all together into one weapon, it'd be the most dangerous and unstable thing in the world."
Georgia looked at Yeron, who seemed to be reading her thoughts, "how long do you think they knew?"
Georgia shrugged, "you're guess is as good as mine."
"What are you guys talking about?" Gera asked. |
_________________
I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Boon
Lone Wolf
Speaker of the Forum
Gender:
Age: 15
Joined: 21 Feb 2007
Posts: 709
Reviews: 102
Country: Heaven wouldn't accept me and Hell was afraid I'd take over.
300 Points
|
| Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 9:23 pm Post subject: |
|
|
"Well, I think this is some form of spell," I said.
"Do you know what kind of spell?" Gera asked.
"I'm not sure," Georgia said, "but I heard that some of this stuff together is deadly against Magical Creatures. I think this could be used to plot against killing us all."
"So you're saying all these things could kill every single magical creature?" I asked.
"Yeah. If someone could get this stuff easily, I'm sure someone else has a whole nother set." |
_________________
Your life is yours alone. Rise up and live it.
-Terry Goodkind, Sword of Truth: Faith of the Fallen-
-DragonFireAsh- |
|
| Back to top |
|
Alice
Disaster Zone
Writer of Legend
Gender:
Age: 14
Joined: 28 Jan 2007
Posts: 5132
Reviews: 259
Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here
247 Points
|
| Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 12:09 am Post subject: |
|
|
Georgia confirmed her thoughts, "I can almost guarentee it. Even if they just duplicated these, they would be just as powerful, if done properly, not more."
*I don't know what else to do* |
_________________
I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Boon
Lone Wolf
Speaker of the Forum
Gender:
Age: 15
Joined: 21 Feb 2007
Posts: 709
Reviews: 102
Country: Heaven wouldn't accept me and Hell was afraid I'd take over.
300 Points
|
| Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 10:32 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| I picked up the Werewolf Tooth lying on the table and examained it. "If he has only one tooth, then I'm sad to say, a lot more people probably has tooth," I said. "Then our canine teeth, those are the most dangerous. Only three more people have those, those are the people we have to worry about." |
_________________
Your life is yours alone. Rise up and live it.
-Terry Goodkind, Sword of Truth: Faith of the Fallen-
-DragonFireAsh- |
|
| Back to top |
|
Alice
Disaster Zone
Writer of Legend
Gender:
Age: 14
Joined: 28 Jan 2007
Posts: 5132
Reviews: 259
Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here
247 Points
|
| Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 12:42 am Post subject: |
|
|
"If they have more teeth they had to have killed him, and then they'd have the hide, the bones, the claws, whoever did it, isn't about to share. Put our stuff on a warlock and it'd be the most deadly force in Sada." The color draind from Georgia's face as she realized something, "thats why the preist is back! Whoever has the origional or the rest of these things i controling him."
The others dazed and confused expressions were cut off by a hostile sounding rusteling in the trees. They drew their weapons. |
_________________
I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Boon
Lone Wolf
Speaker of the Forum
Gender:
Age: 15
Joined: 21 Feb 2007
Posts: 709
Reviews: 102
Country: Heaven wouldn't accept me and Hell was afraid I'd take over.
300 Points
|
| Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:18 pm Post subject: |
|
|
"It's only us," Laney said stepping out of the brush.
"You shouldn't scare us like that, Laney," I said, putting away my sword.
"What's going on?" said a voice from the brush.
"It's nothing Shadalina." |
_________________
Your life is yours alone. Rise up and live it.
-Terry Goodkind, Sword of Truth: Faith of the Fallen-
-DragonFireAsh- |
|
| Back to top |
|
Alice
Disaster Zone
Writer of Legend
Gender:
Age: 14
Joined: 28 Jan 2007
Posts: 5132
Reviews: 259
Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here
247 Points
|
| Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 2:44 am Post subject: |
|
|
| Georgia sank further back into her cloak, this wasn't good, they were gaining an entorage. One that would draw attention. "Yeron," Georgia whispered, "we're going to draw attention to ourselves." |
_________________
I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
|
| Back to top |
|
TNCowgirl
Horse Freak/ Storybook junkie
Writer of Legend
Gender:
Age: 16
Joined: 13 May 2007
Posts: 5021
Reviews: 98
Country: USA
5 Points
|
| Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 2:47 am Post subject: |
|
|
Laney
"If you think it is cause you have to many people, I can sneak around with out being seen. I can follow from a distance." Laney said looking the two over.
*Sorry, just trying to help keep it alive* |
_________________
my Blog:Down South
Vist my world and make it bigger!
http://tncs-world.myminicity.com/
Want a Readers crit???
Gone until Monday! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
ELven-Maiden
Mars. is. Fricken. Awesome. Hands down. GO MARS!!
Novelist
Gender:
Age: 14
Joined: 27 Dec 2006
Posts: 425
Reviews: 52
300 Points
|
| Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:43 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Gera sat back in the shadows. She knew nothing about priests, except that they brought trouble. Several times they had thrown some sort of water on her as if they expected her to burn or melt or something. But that had been harmless. What other danger could they possibly bring?
"What priest?" she asked. "What are we talking about?" |
_________________
Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
GO HORACE!
I have some IA on Venus, but I don't know how long it'll last. my com's getting crushed.
"Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you."~Carl Jung, psychologist and psychiatrist. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
