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midnightwolf92
Bubbles in my mind.... Novelist

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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:44 pm Post subject: |
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| *Okay I remember now. As I told Alice, maybe we can use something like the Imperious Curse from Harry Potter but the Gaurdians use it to gain information about the characters. Good or no?* |
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Alice
Disaster Zone Writer of Legend

 Gender:  Age: 14 Joined: 28 Jan 2007 Posts: 5063 Reviews: 259 Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here 235 Points
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:45 pm Post subject: |
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| *The whole idea was for you to write it* |
_________________ I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
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midnightwolf92
Bubbles in my mind.... Novelist

 Gender:  Age: 15 Joined: 23 Dec 2006 Posts: 368 Reviews: 31
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 12:10 am Post subject: |
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*OH....Heh, heh....oops*
Eve collapsed on the ground. Corelle ran back to her. She opened her eyes.
"What the....?" she sat up. "How did I get here. I was just sleeping a minute ago."
"What happened to her?" Zora asked.
"It might be what had been bothering me the last few days. The Gaurdians have the power to take control of people for a short time. They forget everything afterwards. The Gaurdians use when they want info on us or when we are close to try and lure us off," Corelle said. He supported Eve's head with his leg. |
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Alice
Disaster Zone Writer of Legend

 Gender:  Age: 14 Joined: 28 Jan 2007 Posts: 5063 Reviews: 259 Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here 235 Points
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 12:06 am Post subject: |
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| Eve felt so tired she could hear the others talking about something but at the moment. she didn't care. She drifted off to sleep. |
_________________ I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail.
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Alice
Disaster Zone Writer of Legend

 Gender:  Age: 14 Joined: 28 Jan 2007 Posts: 5063 Reviews: 259 Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here 235 Points
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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| *AHHHHHHH it died!!!!!!!!* |
_________________ I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
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Dynamo
Master of Plot Devices Master of the Forum

 Gender:  Age: 18 Joined: 20 Jan 2006 Posts: 1988 Reviews: 87 Country: A wizard did it. 290 Points
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 11:06 am Post subject: |
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| (Well, if people start posting again we can get this storybook back up. This actually lasted longer than the last time I tried this idea. The first time I tried it was when YWS was down and we all had to post on another forum until it was back up. We didn't even get into the story before people just stopped posting.) |
_________________ "You should try thinking outside the box once in a while."
"Hey, the box is there for a reason. I like thinking inside of it, I feel safe in there." |
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Alice
Disaster Zone Writer of Legend

 Gender:  Age: 14 Joined: 28 Jan 2007 Posts: 5063 Reviews: 259 Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here 235 Points
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 9:07 pm Post subject: |
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| (I say its Chris's turn or something) |
_________________ I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
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Alice
Disaster Zone Writer of Legend

 Gender:  Age: 14 Joined: 28 Jan 2007 Posts: 5063 Reviews: 259 Country: In a book or a story, anywhere but here 235 Points
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Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 4:29 pm Post subject: |
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Eve sat up and rubbed her eyes, "where...what happened?"
"Long story."
"Well, I'm assuming we have time, but of course I don't know so could somebody please fill me in?" She was still tired beyond belief and felt like there was something wrong with that. Having nothing better to do she leaned back against Corelle, finding comfort there.
*There, there's something now!* |
_________________ I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
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sylverdawn
Novelist

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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:18 pm Post subject: |
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| Is it too late to join? |
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Alice
Disaster Zone Writer of Legend

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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:26 pm Post subject: |
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| No, but be warned, this has a tendency to die A LOT. |
_________________ I'm Alice.
For the record, I'm not a crack addict, I don't chase rabits wearing waistcoats down holes, and I can't see the future.
And if you don't get any of those you epic fail. |
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sylverdawn
Novelist

 Gender:  Age: 16 Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 428 Reviews: 40
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 12:07 am Post subject: |
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<Ras>
It was all my fault. My breath misted slightly in front of me as a ran across the frozen landscape. Fire, my soul dragon was flying beside me, in this form he was no bigger then a falcon, with jewwel colored eyes, and red/orange/gold scales, the shone in the darkness.
I glanced behind me and saw the imp demons who were chasing me were gaining. I shivered knowing I was better off dead then caught by Baal's lackeys.
"Almost there." I told myself more then Fire. "Just a little further, and we'll have relative safety."
A short distance ahead a glittering light seemed to hang in space, it was oval shaped and swirling with all the colors of the rainbow. By breath caught, and I almost stopped just to stare at it.
I stopped in front of the light and Fire landed on my shoulder, protectively wrapping his tail around my throat. I turned and looked back at the frozen world I had known all my life, which wasn't very long, I was only seventeen. The white barren landscape where nothing grew, the starless, moonless, night sky, where the sun never rose.
The imps were almost on top of me. As I jumped through the gate into the human world, I could here a shriek of frustration behind me, and knew Baal wouldn't give up just 'cause I was in the human world. I landed in the graveyard, where I had last seen Arce.
I saw people nearby, shining with the aura of magic. Exhausted, my knees buckled and I fell to the ground FIre beside me. Right before I passed out I whispered again. "It was all my fault." |
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