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I Will Follow You Into The Dark: Chapter Three
I Will Follow You Into The Dark: Chapter Three

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 11:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

'Lo CCF. noticed you haven't logged on in a while. Is the business still open because I recently ordered a crit.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 12:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Senz'altro, ragazzo--siamo in ritardo, qualche volte perche, dio mio, la vita e pazza. ^_~

In other words, very much in business if slightly delayed by various ventures vaguely out of simple familial control. You'll have your crit.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 12:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A note to users, Please remember to include a link to your work in your message, it helps eliminate any confusion and saves us a little time.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 1:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

CCF, I request in here not for critque but to join the family. I largely felt unworthy before but admire you're work. Now I critque more and wish to become part of you're extensive network of reviewers.

I know not the right place to ask but couldn't think of anywhere else.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 7:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I notice the thread hasn't been posted to in a while, is the CCF still open for business? you may have another customer in me.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

We are always open m'dear ~_^

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I just sent a message. This should be interesting. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 7:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Um, Cabassi? Did you get my message? It's been five days.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry about the triple post, (I can delete it later,) but it's been almost a month. Hate to harangue y'all, but this is lousy customer service! Wink

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mi dispiace, Jenna...apologies and all that. THe Cabassi will have to be, er, knocked around a bit, perhaps. They've gotten rather lazy... ^_^;


I'll try to hit it for you within a few days, if not before.









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PostPosted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 6:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Err, this is sort of a Grand Re-Opening.

The CCF are back in business for sure and we promise that as soon as your message meets our eyes we will be on it like a Cop on Donut.

Due to the failing economy there is now a Discount in prices.

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5 for a Basic Review.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Vernon wrote:
CCF, I request in here not for critque but to join the family. I largely felt unworthy before but admire you're work. Now I critque more and wish to become part of you're extensive network of reviewers.

I know not the right place to ask but couldn't think of anywhere else.


No.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Adam_Atlantian wrote:
We are always open m'dear ~_^


We're like 7/11. Not always doing business, but always open.

@Snoink: Leave the gun, take the cannolis.

And CCF will destroy SPEW if its the last thing we do. Dai, ragazzi? Vero?

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*munches on cannolis*

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OK, I got a three-part story called Tangled Up In Blue.

1: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post382487.html
2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31268.html
3: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31373.html

I'm guessing I have to pay 30 points for each installment. So. Who do I give my 90 points to? I did read the old post, but since it's a grand re-opening and stuff, maybe the rules have changed? I don't know.

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