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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dai, no worries, vero? A critique by midnight is a critique on time; and some deadlines get nearer the dead part than is necessarily needed. ^_~

No threatening the mob before the date's come and gone.









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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool Wouldn't dream of threatening you... Very Happy

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 3:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It has been done, with 3 minutes to spare.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 5:07 pm    Post subject: - Reply with quote

Pleasure doin' business wit yous.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 10:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I must say, I've seen the critiques given and they are indeed of very high quality Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 10:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 12:50 am    Post subject: - Reply with quote

It's been five days and my piece still hasn't been critiqued. Just a reminder...

You guys are getting lazy Wink

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 5:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your Date of request is August 10th.

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Kylan has donated 50 Points to you.

Kylan wrote:
Honor #1 in the Action/adventure forum needs critiquing.

-Kylan


Do not press the CCF. We are not above refunding your points and blacklisting you.

And as you can see your previous request was filled the day you sent it.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic18490.html

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 6:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hehehe, you have to watch out with la famiglia. If you're nice, they'll give you cannolis. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:19 pm    Post subject: - Reply with quote

Oh, I'm so sorry! This was a misunderstanding! I wasn't refering to that particular piece in my last post here, but "Cirque de Feu" which I asked to be critiqued five days ago and which I realize now, was completed within the deadline timeframe!

I'm so sorry for the confusion. It's my fault.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Do not press the CCF. We are not above refunding your points and blacklisting you.



hmmm I understand the "do not press" part--no one likes being bothered, and heck, you'll get it done when you can, but I think blacklisting is completely unfair/uncalled for.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 6:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oy, questo e "the mob", Signorina Clau - blacklisting is an inescapable tradition. ^_~



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Oh, I'm so sorry! This was a misunderstanding! I wasn't refering to that particular piece in my last post here, but "Cirque de Feu" which I asked to be critiqued five days ago and which I realize now, was completed within the deadline timeframe!



Don't worry, Kylan - misunderstandings are understood to be commonplace. No blacklists and no threats are directed at you. ^_^








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PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, guys. Just a quick question: I doanted the points for one of my stories to be critiqued, but then the points count was re-set not long after. Do I need to donate again?

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 11:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have a proposition.

It's obvious that the CCF has suffered lately. No business, no mob. I think you need to find a way to revitalize. Come back bigger and better (and cheaper) than ever.

Go through discount periods. Have three hour periods where members can get a critique for twenty points. You'll get more business, more attention, and more publicity. Soon people will come to you with the full fifty point because they've seen you around.

Something like that anyway. I thought the CCF was a great idea.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 6:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, At the moment, Lack of group activity has been the problem.

If the points are reset after you have sent the message you do not need to re-send point. We have a record of all the points donated to us, so we know you gave them, even if they are gone.

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