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 Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 1:06 am Post subject: |
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This is my first Ciniquian and it has no title so....
Meaning:
Essential, illusory.
Tantalizes, Captivates, Absconds.
It is insensibly sought.
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whence
look, it's a whence.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 10:55 pm Post subject: |
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Alright, contest is closed!
Expect results in the next few days. |
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The good parts of a book may be only something a writer is lucky enough to overhear or it may be the wreck of his whole damn life — and one is as good as the other.
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whence
look, it's a whence.
Speaker of the Forum
Gender:
Age: 16
Joined: 12 May 2007
Posts: 703
Reviews: 314
Country: For Old Men (take that, Coen brothers)
350 Points
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| Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 8:54 am Post subject: |
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The Results are in!
3rd place goes to...: Kitty! For 'The Dance'. Great job on meeting both rhyming and syllabic constraints!
2nd place goes to....: Kel, for 'Novel/Untitled'. The whole poem felt fresh and new, and line 4 was especially excellent.
and finally, the winner is.....Claudette! For her Cinquain 'Beauty/Untitled'. It was a lovely piece  .
Thank you all for participating, feel free to PM me the links to whichever pieces you'd like critiqued whenever you want.
If you entered, you've got at least one critique comin' 
EDIT: I nearly forgot: Clau and Kel, we can discuss commission details any time |
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