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Kitty15
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 Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 3:17 pm Post subject: |
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Don't worry, we wont kill your characters.
River
I saw Kasko return and his words registered in my mind but they would not solidify until I had touched him. I took hold of his hand and smiled at his surprise then suddenly I drew him towards me and threw my arms around his neck.
"I'm glad you're okay Kasko," I murmered, pulling away so that only our hands remained joined and then I dragged him back down the tunnel after the others.
A few seconds later he recovered from his surprise and pulled me up to his speed so that we caught up with Caden and Liskano in no time.
"You might be wanting to stop and rest now. That bomb be doing no damage to us," Kasko grinned at them.
"What have you two done, brother?" Liskano asked.
"The Emperor's in for a big surprise," I replied, repeating Kasko's words to me. |
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| Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 2:21 pm Post subject: |
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Srry, I don't have a lot of time right now, please play my chactor, i'll be gone for two straight weeks.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 11:23 pm Post subject: |
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"That doesn't help us," Caden grumbles. "Cant you say anything more speceific?"
"Oh, believe me, it will help," River replied with a smile.
Caden smiled back, then, shifting Molton to make sure he wasn't hurting the old man, started towards teh cellar. "You think the 'big surprise' is enough to take out the Emperor and end the war once and for all?" |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 9:44 am Post subject: |
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River
"I don't think it will reach the outskirts of the camp but it should be big enough to take out most of them," I replied, turning towards Kasko who nodded in agreeance.
"That do be so. It should be a very big surprise."
"Will we hear the explosion, my brother? How far had they travelled?" Liskano asked.
"A surprisingly large distance and I do believe that the explosion has already occured," Kasko answered.
We reached the cellar not much later than that and found the other outcasts waiting for us. A cheer went up as we squeezed into the room and many of our friends surged forwards to shake our hands.
"Let's go into the pub," Caden decided. Someone opened the trap door and we filtered out, into the larger room. I helped to carry Molton up to his room and we layed him gently on the bed.
"Should I fetch Willow?" I asked, refering to an elf who was experienced in healing. |
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| Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 2:12 am Post subject: |
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| "Do you have to ask?" Caden answered. "By all means, yes." he turned to see Liskano behind him, Hake still slung over his shoulder. "Take him to another room and tie his wrists to the bedpost or something. And please," he added with a weak smile. "Gag him securely." |
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