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Angel of Death
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 Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 11:48 pm Post subject: |
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I haven't cried in a long time Sumi, this is so beautiful. Really, your title is what intrigued me from the beginning but the way you wrote this was like poetry in every form of the word. All of the mistakes have been pointed out, but wow!! I really loved this.
Keep writing,
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